This is so sad,
you made me cry a little.
I like your style of writing, it's nice to read something good once in a while. :]

Woof! That was long, but a worthwhile read. :D Glad you could share this.

PS. Irrelevant, but I loved your jokes so much I just had to save it to my hard drive. XD

That's so sad! Love the brother concept, (as you know, I've used it a lot) and go Sesshomaru! and to a lesser extent, Kouga. ^^ Make the idiot monk do as you say or rip him to shreds! ^^

This was such a good, but sad, story! Great job writing it though.