This is a great story. I like the characterization, and the plot is engrossing. So update!

This is a very intriguing story; I do hope you'll continue on with it! I love the depth you go to to examine Severus and Hermione's feelings and thoughts after being released, that post-trumatic stress type of disposition. Really interesting and unique.

This is such an interesting and well-done story! I like the dark and gritty atmosphere you've created, and the direction you seem to be taking things. I do hope you're planning on continuing and completing it?

Brilliant and gripping. Your storyline is unlike any other, it had me aching for more. Keep up the excellent writing.

I had feared when I started reading this story that it had been forgotten about, but I hope its just a long gap between chapters? I'm utterly hooked and cannot wait to read more :)

This is one of the best stories I've had the pleasure of reading in quite a long while.

I generally love stories of any genre that choose not to ignore the harsh realities that "canon" ignores, and this certainly falls under that.

The sex scene squicked me out HORRIBLY, which is honestly the first time it has happened to me that I haven't written myself. I'm so glad you went there. It immediately moved this story into a higher plane of existence. I can honestly say that I have no idea how, or if, Severus and Hermione can ever reach a place emotionally that it would be healthy for them to be together, which makes for an excellent story, in my opinion.

Some things have been glossed over; for example, I think that Hermione's parents handled it all too well and they have transitioned back into the world a little bit too easily. However, I sense that you are not done addressing these issues so the jury is still out.

You've handled a grisly story well, so far. Though at first I was afraid there was going to be too much melodramatic angst to handle, it hasn't been so. The various situations have been executed realistically overall. It's too soon to say much else, so I look forward to more. Thanks for sharing.

Please, Please, Please tell me you are still writing this story, it is very good. I can see all kinds of possible scenario's that will be nail biting. You have to finish it. It's killing me you left with such a cliffy. Love It, liked Treasure as well, I promise when you update this story I'll leave a long thorough review of Treasure as a bribe.

Hey, I'm a big fan of Treasure, so I went on your profile to llok for something good to read. And, luckly, I found this one. I'm enjoying a lot teh reading. And (as in Treasure you) I can you can keep them both in character and write a really great story. Great development in their imprisonment, I must also say.
Oh, and as any anxious reader I have to ask you to update soon =)

PS: I'm curious.. Is pregnant? O.o.
I know you're not telling me, but I just had to ask.

Aside from an itching desire to maim Ronald Weasley, I'm definitely loving the story. :)

I really like what you've written so far, although I have to admidt that it was sweet of Severus to care for Hermione as he did during their time as prisoners.

PLEASE UPDATE QUICKLY AND SOON! (THIS WOULD PROBABLY MEAN ASAP!) ;)

war and torture are always good reads. i hope you update soon, i'd love to see where this is heading.

Amazing story and plotline. The character of snape is extremely realistic. Please update soon.

Just discovered your story, quite a story you have developed and I look forward to following it as you add to it. Quite a little cliff hanger to end on I have theories on it which I look forward to seeing if they are correct.

this is a very well written story. Sometimes with S/hr stories, theres problems getting the character of Snape right, but you've done a great job. please update soon!

I just found this story again after a long time of not finding it. I'm so glad you've continued with it and i can't wait for the next update!