Great story- I always thoroughly enjoy your pieces, and it seems you never run out of funny snippets! Just one thing- the Wall that's being broken is the Fourth, not the Third. The first three refer to the left and right sides and the back, while the fourth is the invisible one. Other than that, your storytelling is perfect. Rock on, girl!

=D cool! Poor Ratchet =)

Great, easy read. Truly enjoyed it! If I weren't sitting in a library, I'd probably be laughing quite loudly.

Lucky girl, winning this.

*laughs nervously* I already broke down that wall with my characters...*hystarically* I'm still being hunted!

More! Muck more!! Lots More! I love Ratch,lol!

This is so cute! Hey when did Jazz get glomped?

XD

More More MORE!

Sucks your laptop broke down; I know how a dead computer feels. T-T Anyway, very cute; I love the "breaking the wall" thing going on. Nicely done.

What a great gift for Mel! XD Had me laughing even before I started reading.

Love the "Jazz is huggability squared"! Too true!

Oh, so that's why it's been a while for "Jux". Too bad Wheeljack can't fix it for you...

Oh dear heavens... XD

(Hee! This is awesome, thank you! =D)

**snickers uncontrollably** Oh my goodness, this is gold. I'm still surprised Evelyn (Or Sideswipe) have not finally snapped and lunged forward to strangle LittleCafei to death. XD

And you incorporated my love of Graffiti into this! Squee! X33

Love Mel's character, Evelyn's in for a whole new world of hell. X3

*cheers for Mel* Remember to take photos! (Ratchet should be glad you didnt let all of us aboard! XD) Also, hope your laptop gets fixed!

*seethes with jealousy at Meallanmouse*
all those mechs...

lol crazy fan girl
ratch gets to deal with another human

XD I was expecting something akin to Terminator but that method requires one nekkid, so One-Who-Should-Not-Be-Named's method sounds much safer. :D

Chaos to the power three!