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| jevans47403 2008-08-08 ch 1, | abuseLMAO Wow that was hilarious especially when Warrick caught Nick and Sara in the car about to go for round 2. Talk about embarassing, LMAO! You've done a great job please keep this going if u can. I love the last quote; Warrick Brown let out a knowing snicker, “Uh, I don’t mean to interrupt you on your ‘break’, but Grissom just got a call from the sheriff. Apparently, the consultant mixed up the results for the team building assignment with one they were supposed to provide to Shady Lady’s Strip-o-Rama.” Maybe you can do "Lab coats and coveralls 2" but with Catherine and Warrick, what do u think? |
| Piper Gilmore 2008-07-09 ch 1, | abuseSo, this was my very first Snickers fic. I don't know how I got here, because previous to this I thought that I hated Snickers. But let me tell you... that was hot. Way too hot for a ship I didn't think I was sailing on. You may have just landed a new passenger. |
| Mma63 2008-03-05 ch 1, | abuseSorry for the delayed review. I missed you so much in CSI fanfic world. I'm glad you came back from your semi-retirement. Looks like since Jorja Fox left the show some of the good authors lost their interest on writing. Sad cause I think that's more than a good reason to put on words the plots they keep in mind. Anyway, I've to say that I completely agree when you said the "aforementioned writers" had no clue of what to do with the GSR stuff they imposed. As much as I try to look impartially at them like a couple is hard not to notice they act like two good friends more in a father/daughter relationship. There's no sparks between them. Great piece! Don't run away again! |
| Angel-of-vampires 2008-02-20 ch 1, | abuseHehe! I found this so funny! And the ending was just perfect! lol! |
| mel 2008-02-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseHilariousness. This did make me feel a lot better. Brought me back to the good old days. Way back. Although laughing makes me cough. A lot. I do love any story that mentions a place called Shady Lady's Strip-o-rama. And that has naked hotties. And nectarines! Nectarines are so much better than peaches. That's the only thing I'm sure I'll ever agree with Grissom on. I also had a random thought yesterday. Remember the pornstache? That seems like 800 years ago. Like boring St. Louis I'm not a doctor yet years ago. How times flies. Oh I'm also assuming you can figure this is me. I think I forgot my login. Or it expired or something. |
| Space-Case7029 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. Very cute. I thought maybe the assignment got mixed up, but funny that Grissom just went along with it. I hope that you can get some more ideas for Snickers stories. Loved it. Audra |
| Storm 08 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abuseLOL I can just picture that. Well written. Love it. |
| bauerfreak 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abuseLOL! Naked work night...the idea of it is both ridiculous and hilarious at the same time. I couldn't concentrate with Nick's chest staring at me all evening, so I'm glad Sara decided to jump on the opportunity to get frisky with Nick. I was so glad to see a Snicker fic from you! Yay Snickers! |
| JodyW 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abuselol, great story, love the ending. I'm so glad to see you back writing CSI, I've missed your stories |
| SaraLou 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abuseThat was freaking hilarious! Naked Work Day - I would die personally! But also I would get written up (working with kids and all) lol! But that was funny |
| katydid13 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abuseLOL! I hope people manage to pull you out of retirement far more often!! |
| loommyloon 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abuseLOL ! |
| CSI-4077 2008-02-17 ch 1, | abuseThat was great. I don't really read CSI fanfics since Sara left, but it was a nice blast from the past. That makes it sound like a decade ago, meh. Great story! |
| jdcocoagirl 2008-02-17 ch 1, | abuseooh i love laughing in the ending great job. |
| agent1332 2008-02-17 ch 1, | abuseWhat a mix up!! Oh my goodness. Did Grissom not think to check with the consultant to confirm the results the lab was sent? I can just imagine what Ecklie's reaction to all of this will be. That was a great story. So glad you came out of semi-CSI Retirement to give us this story. Keep up the good work on all stories. |