Good Story!
I like stories where Luke join with his father, because... they are a family and Vader loves him.

Ok, it's a corrupted and dark love, but is our favourite Dark Lord's love.

Good story

good story

Another awesome oneshot! Wonderful!

Congratulations, Valerie! But I think this change was too fast. One moment Luke did'nt want tell Vader about Yoda's place, second time he become angry, power hungry etc. etc.
I know Obi Wan's and Yoda's training was'nt long and Luke was'nt Jedi yet, I know he wanted to have/to know his father, I know Obi Wan lied "in certain point of view" to him.

But Obi Wan died for him. Did Luke forget about it? Did Luke forget about the cave on Dagobah and what happened there? Forget about many other things? For example: Han helped Luke with Death Star and Han saved his life on Hoth.

Your story is great and I like it, but everything happened too fast.

Do you like to write Dark Luke fics? This is another good one.

awesomeness! y0ur the best at writing fanfiction for Star Wars!

great storyline.

Oh my gosh Luke! I feel so bad that he was so cruel to Leia. Who will save Anakin and Luke now? It was a good story though, nice work!

Wow. Way awesome!)

wow... dark.

Great story from the beginning to the end. Somehow Luke's decisions feel realistic when motivated by the despair of the revelation.

but what about leia?

another good one

Heh, this is a great story, I like all the others as well. Keep it up.