 GreenSnake 2/4/12 . chapter 1Good Story!
I like stories where Luke join with his father, because... they are a family and Vader loves him.
Ok, it's a corrupted and dark love, but is our favourite Dark Lord's love. |
 Replica Velocity a.k.a. X5 714 3/15/11 . chapter 1Good story |
 Megagalvatron12 3/10/11 . chapter 1good story |
 hpenchantress 10/9/10 . chapter 1Another awesome oneshot! Wonderful! |
 Kate Poem 1/24/10 . chapter 1Congratulations, Valerie! But I think this change was too fast. One moment Luke did'nt want tell Vader about Yoda's place, second time he become angry, power hungry etc. etc.
I know Obi Wan's and Yoda's training was'nt long and Luke was'nt Jedi yet, I know he wanted to have/to know his father, I know Obi Wan lied "in certain point of view" to him.
But Obi Wan died for him. Did Luke forget about it? Did Luke forget about the cave on Dagobah and what happened there? Forget about many other things? For example: Han helped Luke with Death Star and Han saved his life on Hoth.
Your story is great and I like it, but everything happened too fast. |
 sweetyamiyugigirl 11/26/09 . chapter 1Do you like to write Dark Luke fics? This is another good one. |
 Golden feathers Edward 4/16/09 . chapter 1awesomeness! y0ur the best at writing fanfiction for Star Wars! |
 badkidoh 2/16/09 . chapter 1great storyline. |
 ibelieveintruelove 1/17/09 . chapter 1Oh my gosh Luke! I feel so bad that he was so cruel to Leia. Who will save Anakin and Luke now? It was a good story though, nice work! |
 Kaylen Cooper 8/27/07 . chapter 1Wow. Way awesome!) |
 KoiGirlPGSM 3/12/07 . chapter 1wow... dark. |
 SerpentClara 12/6/06 . chapter 1Great story from the beginning to the end. Somehow Luke's decisions feel realistic when motivated by the despair of the revelation. |
 Relyan 6/23/06 . chapter 1but what about leia? |
 Dirbatua 12/6/04 . chapter 1another good one |
 Disgruntled Minion 9/11/04 . chapter 1Heh, this is a great story, I like all the others as well. Keep it up. |