The first paragraph is undeniably hilarious!I love Sesshoumaru's criticism of the paper doll.

Aw this was so cute I loved it!

Absolutely love it, and this is so how I see their daily interactions when the manga isn't centered on them! Rin is so adorable!

- best line ever -
"No, Sesshoumaru-sama," she agreed, her hands cupping his face with a tenderness no one else had ever dared show him. "You're much prettier."

lol the first paragraph was totally funny ...but my favorite is the ending when she said to him he was much prettier i think it was abosolutely the most sweetest thing ever

Oh my God that was funny! So adorable, especially the way you portrayed Rin. Nice job!

hehehhehe! Last part was so cute.

Aww, that was so sugary sweet, I think all my teeth have rotted off. Well done, I liked it! :)

-bc

That was the most fun I've had reading a fanfiction in...well...EVER! That was ABSOLUTELY HILARIOUS. A piece of pure InuYasha comedic gold. I bow before your literary genius! -kowtows-

Aw! Rin seems like such a mother!

very cute lol

Lmao. Awesome idea, that was soo funny. The first paragraph had me laughing too xD