Absolutely beautiful! Your writing style is exquisite.

It's really the perfect perspective on Jacob and Bella's relationship, because you don't really know what could happen, you can just hope for the best.

The reluctant kiss, the first date, everything is magnificently written out.

~Reaching-For-The-Moon

that was amazing! i really love jacob and bella's relationship throughout the books, and this really added to my love for their story. i can totally see this happening, and you got the emotions perfectly! you did an amazing job showing their relationship through their actions instead of just talking about it. this is really one of the best Jacob/ bella fanfics i've ever read!

That was great. I think bella and Jacob would be a very cute couple.

This was so amazing! I loved it and the way you narrated it is very original. Although it's great, I can't ask for more chapters because maybe it wouldn't go with your writing style. I love Jacob and Bella and it's always heartbreaking to read them. Great story!