Yay! This is good.

Hi, it's a very nice one-shot. I like the way you did the Tachikomas, they seem in character (Batou and Togusa too, though). Like very smart and strong children, still learning about the world and asking questions. I like this one more than Value Undefined, because of the enthousiastic Tachikoma's. Keep up the good work!

Priceless. Only Batou and Togusa could create those kind of weird moments. I loved this chapter. Good job.

Squee! Perfect! Wonderful! Bravo!

This won't be much of a constructive criticism because I can't find anything to fault. I adore Tachikoma and you characterised them perfectly. A very amusing, cute story.

As a 'natural' I don't know whether to feel insulted or laugh my ass off. If those machines are anything like my overprotective mum...poor Togusa! Granted, I love the guy too and wouldn't want to see him get hurt, but really. Maybe he should keep a hand-operated can opener handy to help ward them off?

Nice work! ^_^ I've always loved the Tachikomas; they're so cute, especially the one who asked Batou in the anime, "Tell me, what does it feel like to have a ghost?" That line always cracks me up, the way it said. XD

Super good one shot! I love Togusa! Kind of cute of the Tachikomas to think that way.

A very enjoyable one-shot. It;s good to see someone of your heart work in the GitS universe - it isn't all shootouts and tech, after all!

very nice. i really like this, i'll have to check out the other one.

That was awesome and hilarious, and really kinda of poignant. Loved it!

Thats really nice! I can just see it, too.

I liked it.

This put me on a spur of searching for the Ghost in the Shell 'Tachikoma Days'.
Spent about fifteen minutes squeeing over the tank cuteness!!
^-^

This is great! You sure pack a lot of emotion into a short story. There's a lot of chemistry and depth in this. I love it. I can't wait to see another GITS from ya.

*jumps up and down* When I saw another story had been added, I almost fell out of my chair. I'm so happy you posted this! Two in one week! *hugs you* This was adorable and spectacularly written. I loved their deductions and protectiveness over Togusa. Amazing work! I really, really hope to see another GITS story from you. Your fics are real treasures.
God bless and peace.
~RainyDayz