Well written, and interesting. More soon please!:3

this si really good i hope you continualizate and the reason why you have to is because I (BIG AND BOLD!!) said so ^-^

Anything with Hiruma excites me ^_^
I'm waiting for the next chapter.
It'll be cool if Hiruma vs Kyo =D
Thanx for sharing ^_^

Wow!, This story seems like a good one! I hope you can update soon! and thanks for the chapter!

hey! i love where this is going. it has a good idea & many potentials. keep up the good work.

hey good story so far!