This story is so random. I love it. Write more!

:) Thanks for the update. Hehe. :)
Just wondering: Is this going to turn into a BxE fic, or is it going to stay away from that. Or am I completely wrong...ACK! I just wanna know. I don't know why. XD

"Jessica was fanning over Cristy, "

Who the hell is Cristy? and Jared comes out of no where from the cafeteria hm should'nt he be holding Yuri's hand?

Enjoyed it.

Enjoying this story. Can't wait for more.

YAY :D

this is a good chapter

*pats amanda on the back*

*gives a cookie*

GOOD JOB

now the next chapter from his shoes :D

i love it
but a donut!?!
really how likely is that
but it was funny!
update soon!

Asians...okay?!
Lol. My friend has gotten me obsessed with Asians, actually. Lol. (THANKS A LOT, ONIKA! GR...)
Wow. That was different. Jessica's a robot, and there are some random Asians walking around. Not to mention donut-throwing Latin people. LOL.
Omg, LMFAO. HAHAHAHAHA!
Wow...o_0
I can't wait for more randomness. XD

good job, but I think you should of added more to complete that... emotion. You know the one where the reader just wants to tell you how great the chapter was and how exciting and put together it was? Dont get me wrong it was great, it just felt like it that emotion wasnt complete. sorry if I sound rude I'm just trying to be a good critique

Wow Amanda. Put me to sleep...

He changed his shirt twice and his shirt color was different today so that means another chapter tomorow >D PUAHAHAHAAHA!

add MORE this was short write in the time of vexing people amanda!

i love it
yuri's awesome but why does she hang out with jessica she doesnt seem to enjoy her company.

Shopping, 'eh? Nice chapter. Can't wait for more! ;)

Hmm...I like this. It's a great "New Twilight" It sounds like a rough draft of Twilight, meaning that it sounds like Steph wrote it. Its amazing. If I tried this, one chapter would be way too long, and it wouldnt work. Awesome job! Update, soon! ;)

That reeled me in right away! I will read this! I will see how this ends up! ^_^

i loved it! can't wait to see what happens next!