| Reviews for Technopath |
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Majik513 9/28/12 . chapter 1I absolutely love this fanfiction- I've read it over and over again, and I never get tired of it. _ This was my very first NejiTen fanfiction and its what got me addicted to NejiTen, so thank you! (I would loooove to steal Tenten's panda hoodie- so adorable! _) |
Crazycally 5/7/12 . chapter 1the futuristic style is very different from anything I had prevouly read but I found I rather liked it, thank you. |
SuedeKittenBoots 1/31/11 . chapter 1*Poofs in* Ahem. Once again, I shall say that your work is the most brilliant that I've come across since Scott Westerfield and J.K. Rowling. Now I love this pairing, and must write a NejiTen of my own. KoR: Signing off. *Poofs out* |
Inner Demons 1/2/11 . chapter 1 This fic is amazing (just like all your other stories). I really like how you made their mutations parallel their abilities in Naruto. Very creative. |
piixiiestiix 10/15/10 . chapter 1Cyberpunk!NejiTen is so wonderfully fun to read. The powers you gave them are so fitting. Really great, I'd like to see more NejiTen in this Verse |
empathapathique 3/27/10 . chapter 1Another great story. Girl, you rock my socks :) |
jetblacksakura 12/22/09 . chapter 1pretty good. |
ELunamoon 2/27/09 . chapter 1So TenTen has telepathic powers? and did her teammates know? I got a little confused but your discprtive words are very nice |
The Disappeared 12/20/08 . chapter 1Wow! Great fic! I loved it! |
AGENT Kuma-chan 7/11/08 . chapter 1...the story flowed very nicely (I'm feeling jealous about your writing style) and you kept them IC... (JEALOUS!neji was amusing...XD) And the KibaIno hint? *giggles* WIN! |
burntbanana 5/20/08 . chapter 1You're cyberpunk!verse seriously deserves some more love! I am totally smitten with this world. *sigh* I can't even pick between this and your Ward 7 fics anymore. T_T Anyways, Citizen Erased was what really got me hooked, but for some reason Technopath stands out more for me. I love this fic to death! You've rekindled my love for NejiTen. AND made me want an emotionally controlled radiopod. Looking forward to your next installment! bb |
anthropomorphychan 5/12/08 . chapter 1Loved it. Kinda reminded me of the Uglies, Pretties, Specials trilogy (and then an extra called Extra) by Scott Westerfeld. Loved the whole techno theme. It was really detailed and the idea was pretty impressive. All those technical terms and ideas sounded really good. I wouldn't have a clue if they actually were true/real (the science ideas I mean) but I couldn't care less. It's one of those "it sounds so real it must be" type of thing. Although, maybe you could've made it into separate chapters instead of a one-shot so you could've expanded it a little more, adding a longer storyline. At times, it felt as if the flow was a bit jittery and I thought that some of the ideas ended too abruptly. Overall, great job. morphy |
danielie 5/11/08 . chapter 1Whee! Reading more stories by the awesome writer of 'Colour Theory'! D (Lol, I love that story!) And this one isn't any less awesome. It's just... brilliant. NejiTen FTW! They're so cute. ) (But there's KibaIno... ew. XD I like ShikaIno, lol.) Not that that could ever take away from the awesomeness of this story! Love love love it! Faves! -danielie |
The Square 5/7/08 . chapter 1ONLY SEVEN REVIEWS! what is wrong with this world? I ADORE your cyberpunk!verse. it's so interesting and fresh. i found you through "Color Theory" and just...wow. You have an incredible writing style and I hope that you write more than just fanfiction. It's really inspiring to know that a fellow high school-er is writing so well. It makes me want to take down all the crappy fanfiction I've written. Anyways, keep up your amazing writing! I'm looking forward to more of Color Theory and your cyperpunk stuff. c: |
Erendhyl 4/15/08 . chapter 1Aww, NejiXTenten-ness. This story was wonderful, as is this series as a whole. Great job! |