Such a sad ending. But, I admit, it was actually THE ideal ending for them both, after all, you know their personalities (the two knuckle-heads)! ;)

Great job on this. You captured their characters really well, and you made it realistic. Although...Toushiro was getting alittle frustrating to me...eheheh. :) But he's a stubborn kiddo, ne?

It's too bad Ichigo didn't get to see Toushiro one last time, I do hope (in my mind) that they will meet up again in the future. hehe...I'm already fantasizing that rigght now. XD

Great job again!

~KW

TSUKI-SAN!
*sobs* you've be AWOL for a long time, and *sobs nice to hear from you again. It's been kinda bleak without you in this section...

*Sigh~ anyway, moving on to the review, as usual you've outdone yourself yet again. But I must say, There's some sort of foreboding feeling in this chapter. What with cryptic opening remarks and the clock that was tick-tock-ing away and the 'I hope I see you soon', it certainly sets the mood for something dreadful to happen. Knowing you, that will really happen.

Hm, so this is the last chapter for 'Wheel of Fortune'... that's too bad, the prompts were really good, but hey, I can't ask for a better ending prompt from this compilation.

M'well I guess this is it then, thank you very much for sharing this piece of work to us and great job on another great story (well, compilation).

-mimic

oh-kay~ so when are you putting this up? I'm itching to know what happened in that 'incedent' that they keep on mentioning... so are you spilling what this incedent is next chapter? Or all will be revealed when you put up the real deal? either way, it doesn't change the fact that you have something interesting brewing in here... I hope you'll be able to post the story about this teaser soon.

regards,
mimic

god i really wanna hv a go at that game as well! yes that IS so ichihitsu!! *sque*

What the hell are you talking about Tsuki-san? You're not getting worse, you're anything but worse!

This chapter is really great, I'm really happy that you continued the last prompt, this is very amusing if you must know and it didn't looked like it was abrupt.

Looking forward to the next update =^w^=

-mimic

-waits in anticipation for Hana's explanation- Wait... It cuts off!?!?!? -falls to knees and screams-

XD Poor DeathBerry has no idea.

Rofl. Poor Shiro-chan. Thats what you get for doing something nice. More, More!

eh...? done already? well, anyway, can't do anything about that but... this is something y'know? I remember, whenever I have that stupid flu, I can't move without feeling the need to barf and you're saying that you made this while being sick, wow, I applaud your efforts and for successfully outdoing yourself yet again, Tsuki-san.

This was really nice and highly amusing, and on the side note, it's official I really love your Hyourinmaru, your charactarization of Hyou-chan is amazing. ...hmm, if you don't mind me asking, will there be a companion chapter for this? I'm really curious on the next string of events now that Ichigo passed his flu to Toshirou :3

Thanks very much for sharing this wonderful piece, it's nice break from all the school work and whatnots.

-mimic

LMAO I can't wait to see what happens later... so not only did Hitsugaya give his own but ended up getting Ichigo's into his system as well? XDD I was thinking poor Ichigo but no... This is good!

hehe the ending part was cute XD

He really should eat...

awe don't worry Tsuki-san, you haven't lost your touch. This was really nice, finally someone updated a IchiHitsu fiction with this kind of caliber. There's only a few of you out there, you know?

Anyway, like what I have said this was really nice, the fight scene was awesome and you still have that really neat writting style. The idea was very interesting too, and yeah breakfast is very important, Toushirou is being irresponsible for not eating his. Ichigo's indirect participation in this chapter was really nice too, subtle hinting that there is something going on with the two, real nice. Though i wish you could have made this longer... but that's just me, the chapter can stand on its own as it is.

Okay, i think that's about it, thanks for the very nice bed time story X3

-mimic

Aww!! Ichigo cares!!

Suki-dayo TT_TT... meccha-meccha suki!