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Eric-Delko's-little-girl-4-...
2008-08-18
ch 7,
abusei loved it! its so damn funny!
'gabble
2008-08-09
ch 7,
abusei-uh.
need some milk...
'gabble
2008-08-09
ch 6,
abusewhat about raymund not telling their dad?!?!?!?!?
wah!
i wanna know!
D8
'gabble
2008-08-09
ch 5,
abuseomfg.
i thought rick was gonna crawl out of the elevator with bruises and **.
xD
rick is such a dick. = =
wah! manspasm!
xD
i love it!
'gabble
2008-08-09
ch 4,
abuse“Delko, look man, for once in your life, commit yourself to only one girl. Stop disturbing me and forcing me to be you damn chaperone! "
you said, "you damn chaperone!"
shouldn't it be "your"?
:\
“I was wonderin’ if you don’t mind getting’ my trace results from Natalia. I kinda have my hands full at the moment.”
and shouldn't it be "gettin'"?
haha. xD

anyway, i love speed!
xD
this is my favorite one!!
xD
'gabble
2008-08-09
ch 3,
abusehaha. cooper is so cute.
figuratively. xD
'gabble
2008-08-09
ch 2,
abuselove it! xD
'gabble
2008-08-09
ch 1,
abuseoh sure, include me in only ONE pararaph. = =
anyway, aside from that...i LOVE IT!!
it's SUBLIME!
it's like seeing the phantom of the opera fall into a pit of carrots!
xD
luf100
2008-06-29
ch 7,
abuseAwesome again, really funny.
christiangirliemiranda
2008-06-27
ch 7,
abuseI am still laughing! This chapter was downright hilarious! Especially the whole Dan and his phone! Poor Sasha! Lol! Great chapter as usual!
GOD BLESS!
Miranda
RavennaNightwind
2008-06-27
ch 7,
abuserofl. Hilarious. I loved it!
Wizard-in-Disguise
2008-06-27
ch 7,
abuseOHH, poor Dan! LOL I don't really like Marisol so this wasn't my favorite chapter. It was still a really good chapter though.
Nessa30
2008-06-27
ch 7,
abuseThis is hilarious. I was laughing so hard.
daxy
2008-06-27
ch 7,
abuseLOL! poor Dan, though I can't stop laughing! :)
awesome chapter! Can't wait for more!
Jag Lady
2008-06-27
ch 7,
abuseThat was pretty funny! I loved it! Dan Cooper should be glad he didn't need a proctologist at that point. Yeah, I have to agree with you--Dan Cooper deserved it.
These are funny! MORE! --JL
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