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| Eric-Delko's-little-girl-4-... 2008-08-18 ch 7, | abusei loved it! its so damn funny! |
| 'gabble 2008-08-09 ch 7, | abusei-uh. need some milk... |
| 'gabble 2008-08-09 ch 6, | abusewhat about raymund not telling their dad?!?!?!?!? wah! i wanna know! D8 |
| 'gabble 2008-08-09 ch 5, | abuseomfg. i thought rick was gonna crawl out of the elevator with bruises and **. xD rick is such a dick. = = wah! manspasm! xD i love it! |
| 'gabble 2008-08-09 ch 4, | abuse“Delko, look man, for once in your life, commit yourself to only one girl. Stop disturbing me and forcing me to be you damn chaperone! " you said, "you damn chaperone!" shouldn't it be "your"? :\ “I was wonderin’ if you don’t mind getting’ my trace results from Natalia. I kinda have my hands full at the moment.” and shouldn't it be "gettin'"? haha. xD anyway, i love speed! xD this is my favorite one!! xD |
| 'gabble 2008-08-09 ch 3, | abusehaha. cooper is so cute. figuratively. xD |
| 'gabble 2008-08-09 ch 2, | abuselove it! xD |
| 'gabble 2008-08-09 ch 1, | abuseoh sure, include me in only ONE pararaph. = = anyway, aside from that...i LOVE IT!! it's SUBLIME! it's like seeing the phantom of the opera fall into a pit of carrots! xD |
| luf100 2008-06-29 ch 7, | abuseAwesome again, really funny. |
| christiangirliemiranda 2008-06-27 ch 7, | abuseI am still laughing! This chapter was downright hilarious! Especially the whole Dan and his phone! Poor Sasha! Lol! Great chapter as usual! GOD BLESS! Miranda |
| RavennaNightwind 2008-06-27 ch 7, | abuserofl. Hilarious. I loved it! |
| Wizard-in-Disguise 2008-06-27 ch 7, | abuseOHH, poor Dan! LOL I don't really like Marisol so this wasn't my favorite chapter. It was still a really good chapter though. |
| Nessa30 2008-06-27 ch 7, | abuseThis is hilarious. I was laughing so hard. |
| daxy 2008-06-27 ch 7, | abuseLOL! poor Dan, though I can't stop laughing! :) awesome chapter! Can't wait for more! |
| Jag Lady 2008-06-27 ch 7, | abuseThat was pretty funny! I loved it! Dan Cooper should be glad he didn't need a proctologist at that point. Yeah, I have to agree with you--Dan Cooper deserved it. These are funny! MORE! --JL |