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Reviews For: Negotiations

Heartwings 2008-02-26 ch 1,	abuseI found this well written and with some lovely imagery, but the ending just left me sitting there saying "huh"? While some stories do very nicely leaving the "ending" up to the reader's imagination, I thought you didn't quite give me enough to work with. Perhaps the addition of a paragraph or two would explain the dénouement a bit better? It's not bad, it's just that, if I had read this from a paper book, I would be looking around to see if the last page dropped out.
rockstarla90 2008-02-18 ch 1,	abusehay, i really like this story, but i dont get the ending...did chakotay hurt kathryn? let me know please
PaulaRway 2008-02-18 ch 1,	abuseGood heavens. Stories of this quality are, sadly, few and far between. This is what good writing looks like. Thank you.
Singing Violin 2008-02-18 ch 1,	abuseI love the detail you put into this, especially describing the minute movements (or stillness) of their hands. It's extremely compelling, and leaves me wanting to know more. Perhaps you would consider a companion piece, describing what did happen down there? How could he possibly hurt her? (I feel so bad for Chakotay at the end of this.) And would you consider filling us in on the few times she's actually cried on his shoulder? Your writing is lovely. Please post more!