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| JadziaKathryn 2008-03-29 ch 1, | abuseThis is completely different and fresh. I like that quality. |
| Lattelady 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was an amazing story. You hit depths I know exist with my own grown children. You've gotten it so right. |
| aaabbbey 2008-02-25 ch 1, | abuseThanks for putting this up. This was one of the first stories I read in fandom way back when, and it really impacted my Janeway portrayals. I especially love how the beginning and the end are bookended with the throwing of the plate--it gives it such a rhythm and it's such a strong image for the over all theme. And your Janeway is so believable, so compelling--Gretchen's observation that she got back a stranger but sent one out too is particularly hard-hitting. And I love how you portray Gretchen and Edward's marriage. I don't know if you're writing any more, but I could really stand to read more stories like this. |
| Harm Marie 2008-02-22 ch 1, | abuseVery different. I liked it. |
| cygirl1 2008-02-20 ch 1, | abusePoignant story and well written. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you. |
| PaulaRway 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abuseThis is one of the most thoughtful and thought provoking stories I have read for quite a while. It's so unusual and refreshing to see this type of reflective, and yet realistic, story here. Brilliant. Bravo. |