This was so wonderfully done. I love your insight into Namine's character. Please keep writing! :D

wow i love your writing keep it up :)

*whistles* Whoa, that was good! I love how you depicted these two! Not many people can pull Namine AND Sora off, normally one becomes too hyper, or the other is 'emo'.

I love the style of this, so simple and-

...not going to finish that.