I like this one. It's really cute. Keep it up.

These really aren't bad. I love the one with the singing the most, but the others are great as well. My one criticism, however, is that your grammer could use a little work. Keep up the good work.

i thought it was really good don't know about the latin though i don't speak it,the story had a real how you say enchantment to it. so yeah i'm glad your back writing again i was missing it.
~Aerislives~