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Write-of-Passage
2008-03-29
ch 2,
abuseLOVED it! Loved them meeting Calebs grandfather and Sam drinking the champagne and the chess game between Cullen and Dean. Such great character dynamics, I want more! Great great job!!
That Girl Six
2008-03-04
ch 2,
abuseHiya honey! So sorry this is ridiculously late ... I'm so very amused. This is just what the doctor ordered tonight!

I like the way that Cullen immediately embraces Sam and Dean just because Mac and Caleb do. It says a lot about what he thinks about his son and grandson as people. I like that Cullen isn't "old". Just because he's a grandfather doesn't mean he has to act old. You've made him a nicely rounded character without falling into age cliches. Nicely done!

Heh. Little Sammy drunk. John's going to have a field day!

Now that's a story I would like to hear. Tease!

I'm amused that it takes an outsider to say what everyone knows. Nice!

Do you know how many people here you probably disappointed by not letting John go to the party? Just think of the hijinks! I like when John and Mac just relax and enjoy each other as friends; the two of them together at one of these swoires would be nothing less than priceless. Heh. In the meantime, so was this. It was exactly the laugh that was needed. Nicely done. Happy dances abound!

Happy writing, doll!
KatieLB
2008-02-29
ch 2,
abuseNothing like returning home from out of town and finding a suprise in the inbox! I absolutely love it. I love how you wrote Dean being worried about fitting in but when it came down to it he fit in with the person that counted... and they liked each other. Great job as always! Hope all is well with you ~ m
irismay42
2008-02-28
ch 2,
abuseYou know, I can so see Kiddie!Sammy getting squiffy on champagne!
Lilly B.
2008-02-27
ch 2,
abusethat was a cute story. i really like cullen, and i think dean and him would get along very well. i like how you wrote that out in the story. great job!
gretchless
2008-02-27
ch 2,
abuseaw thats so sweet !
River City1
2008-02-27
ch 2,
abuseI love the way you have written Cullen. He's classey, but not a snob. Nice short story. Thanks!
Winchester73
2008-02-26
ch 2,
abuse"Poker's more my game" love the comeback line. The interaction between Cullen and Dean fab. Clearly have each others measure, if not Caleb's!
HAP
2008-02-26
ch 2,
abuseAww. What a cute ending. After all Dean's fears about standing out, that's exactly what Cullen sees (and likes). And I liked Sam's total excitement over the whole occasion. Looks like he learnt his appreciation of food from his brother. Great little fic.
alwaysateen
2008-02-26
ch 2,
abuseLol! Cool new chapter! I love this character.

I thought we were gonna get to meet him sooner in Ridley's story "Priorities" but it was worth the wait.

He seems pretty cool. :)
Crogos
2008-02-26
ch 2,
abuseAnother fantasic addition to the history of the Brotherhood AU. Darling, this is fabulous. Even when it's not angsty, action-packed or have anything to do with the supernatural at all you and Ridley manage to knock it out of the park--the emotions are just so palpable in each and every character. I love it like no other. The familial relationship with Caleb, and the whole Ames family really, with the boys is divine. I love that Cullen was reunited with Mackland through Caleb; that was so sweet. Also, the line about Cullen trying to groom his next CEO? Hilarious. I love that he wasn't some stuffy old man, and really just accepted the boys into his family. That was really sweet. Oh! And the champagne and Sammy gulping it down? Hee!! Hilarious.

Anyways, this is turning into a novel. Another wonderful fic.
Simone1
2008-02-26
ch 1,
abuseI loved it. I love teen Caleb stories. I cant wait to read more!
SometimesAlways
2008-02-26
ch 1,
abuseLove this little piece, the second one too (Is there gonna be more of that?) :) Nice breaktime fic, for sure :)
Becomingwhaturmeantobe
2008-02-26
ch 2,
abuseAw, that was adorable. I'm glad we finally get to meet Cullen! He's a great character and I love his relationship with Caleb and how he brought Mac and Caleb together. Sammy was so adorable also and I love that Dean is now apart of the family. Awesome story!
cavetrollgrl
2008-02-26
ch 2,
abuseWhat a great story Cullen's great with the Winchesters. The way he broke the ice with Dean was perfect to make him feel like part of the family. Currupting an inoccent child with booze and gambling Cullen got a big heart and a convienent way to get away from the gold digger. And making Caleb nuts was an extra bonus. thanks a lot.
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