It's a little different seeing a story written from the point of view of a child, but I loved the essence of the fic no matter what pov it's in.

Derek being upset over a child murderer, how it made him want to hold his kids close and never let them out of his sight.

Heartwarming.

Nice job! D

Wait who is Tony and Is Emily in this one? Also what are the pairings?

that was a great chapter! I loved it! I love Spence's reaction to Cory being under the chair! They are all so cute!

Okay I'm done now... great story!

That was cute! I love that the other two didn't want to get in trouble and Cory thought he was helping. This was a fun story!

Very cute! This part made me laugh:

You guys are being babies” I said closing the gate behind me

“Duh” I heard Corbin say as I toddled down the hall

Also:

“Um Morgan” Uncle Spencer said

“What Reid if you’re going to drop my chair tell me and we’ll sit it down” daddy said from outside

“I can’t sit it down” Uncle Spencer said

“Why”

“Because one of the boys is under the chair”

I can just see the look on Reid's face and Morgan too.

Can't blame the littlest ones for wanting to be in on the action.

The last lines were great! I'm sad this one is over

aww okay that was adorable!

Brenn is so cute!

eek! I love little kids, their soo cute!

That was adorable! I feel bad for poor Ashley, too bad she doesn't speak baby. I also thought it was cute at how worried Penelope was at leaving them all at daycare all day.

Oh that was so very cute. My sister has worked in day care centers her whole adult life. She loves it but can also relate to days like this.

Poor Brenn, sometimes a kid just wants their mother. I love the stuffed toys the kids got from Penelope

Very cute. Thanks for making me smile at the end of a very long day.

aw, that's a really adorable fic! Love the pairings too, rock on!

Oh, that was a sweet story. I liked that Corbin was trying to help his Daddy. I also thought it was cute that he thinks his parents are superheroes.

Aw, that was so cute and yet so sad. It was great to hear the whole story from Corbin's POV. And of course, I'm glad you made my two favorite couples have the children. :)

aww how sweet! Wayy too cute!

I love this story. It's very interesting to see the world through babies eyes. I think it's very sweet that the kids knew the parents were upset and tried to make things better...

I always like to go see my little nieces and nephews when life gets hard because they always make me smile.

I love Corbin calling his mom and dad Super Heros. So cute!

I don't see that this is complete so I hope that means there is more to come