I can't even count how many times I bust out laughing while reading this...thing. Honestly, what IS this?
Whatever.
XD

Haven't read this kind of sophisticated Fanfiction in a while. Makes me want to agree with you...we're too old. But hey, don't ever stop, ok? XD

Haha, you must had so much fun writing chapter 3! XD

Omg, the scene where Al chases Ed in the living around the table, I was laughing so hard it hurt! XD

I love the first chapter and you can't believe how happy it made me to have a second chapter to read! (or third and fourth!)
I'm glad you continued this story. Too many authors stop after the exciting part begins: the maintaining of a relationship.

Wow, awesome. Just plain awesome. Love the relationship progression. Wow.

Wow, this was just fantastic. It's clever, in a way that keeps it light and almost funny, but doesn't pull any attention from the serious bits. Perfect!

well another good story :D

I was kinda expecting ed to give up and let Roy do it

but I think that letting ed do it was a better finish

Ah, this was brilliant. There's something incredibly fluid and natural about your writing style, and you seem to move between description and character's personal thoughts with incredible ease. A few spelling and grammar mistakes, but really, I was so caught up in the writing I barely noticed. I'm glad I stumbled across this fic, and thank you for writing it.

ReaperRain

I LIKE IT! YOU SHOULD KEEP THIS ONE UPDATED...LOL.

IF U CAN...AND GOOD JOB AT WRITING YOUR ALWAYS THE BEST! LOL

]] GOOD LUCK.

aww so sweet

MAKE ROY BANG UP ED NEXT!

awsome. i loved the way you gave ed that anxiety attack. i absolutlyloved it. maybe i should use it in my story... kidding i would never use someone elses ideas in my frist fanfic ever. i would realy apreciate it if you would read it. its titled 'Confessions of Two Alchemist.' please tell me what you think of it i will have it posted on fanfic by this summer. please. _

I loved that last bit about breaking legs. lol Good show!

-rix

Hey there!

I started reading this fic on the other website, but now that you're posting it here, it'll be better to read it from here.

Uhm... I like this fic, some few slow moments, but now this is getting better, and not just because of the twist it already took and the intimate moment they shared, but because of how they would begin to develop their feelings on this relationship from now on.

I say slow moments, but... I think you're exploring some of their inner psychology to explain their current behaviour and that's okay, I enjoy reading human behaviour...

See you soon... I like your writing... it's very refreshing... bye

a lot of stories i look at and wonder how they got the amount of reviews they got. yours makes me wonder why you only have twelve! this story rox more than twelve reviews! i love it

man, ur are a great writer! so in love with ur story and how ur write ed and roy! can't wait for more