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| TessaStarDean 2008-06-13 ch 1, | abuseLOL. That was really funny and well-written. I think you had both characters' voices down perfectly and the whole scene just flowed. Nicely done. |
| nikki.02 2008-02-19 ch 1, | abuseHaha! Funny. |
| Brinchen86 2008-02-19 ch 1, | abuseOh, the story is really good! Great work! |
| RockinLizzy 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abuseOh, that's really cute! Their drunken stories were pretty funny. (and just a hint, it's a pretty good summary, you don't have to tell people otherwise. They might take that as a reason not to read your stuff. :D ) |
| soswimmer13 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abusei figured out the title, but the t in ETOH should be small, because Et stands for eth- because alcohol is really ethanol. |
| serenity2bliss 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abusePervert Danny!lol! It's 9.06AM here and i love a good humuor to start the day ;) |
| kcatlin 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abuseLOL Oh anymore ? |