Please continue this! Poor Bet.

I love this so far, this is the first Oliver! fiction I have read and am mightily impressed with the idea. I really do hope you continue with this, even if it's been around 6 or 7 years since your last update! Please update again! :D, I love the story so far. :D!

CLearly it's been a few years since you wrote this but it would be awesome if you could continue it. It's an awesome story and Bill was my favourite character in the book. Thanks!

I LOVE IT! Well thats b/c i'm obcessed w/ oliver and oliver tiwst!

wow this is great! i love oliver! dodger is my absolute favorite character in every oliver twist movie. but oliver! is my favorite version. i like dodger's character in this story. its great! i can totally see him going evil. hes under too much pressure anyway. poor kid... anywho are you not going to update anymore? im guessing not since its been almost 2 years since you updated last. i want to know what happens next! poor bet...now youre going to leave me in suspense forever? i dont think so! lol! but seriously, please write more soon! i will be checking back every now and then and will be thoroughly upset and depressed if you dont write more. it really is a great story. there should be more oliver twist stories on ff.net but alas there arent. way to be different! now...please go write some more!

GREAT! I love this so much! Please write more!

Wow this is really good, it brings back memories of when i was doing a local production of oliver! c

Add to it or I shall be forced to kill/exorcise you. It's really good.

I think this is good as I am playing the part of Bet in a school play brill!

OMG write more please and soon, email me when u do okay? at and tell the rest of the cast break a leg for the play, ( um... if u guys didn't already perform yet bye;)

I'm afraid I don't have much to say. But I do want to encourage you to write more; really, it's quite interesting, and as I like Oliver Twist the book, Oliver! the musical and even the silly Disney movie... Well, continue please. Toodles-IMP (Sorry I don't have time to review each chapter.)

I'm afraid I don't have much to say. But I do want to encourage you to write more; really, it's quite interesting, and as I like Oliver Twist the book, Oliver! the musical and even the silly Disney movie... Well, continue please. Toodles-IMP (Sorry I don't have time to review each chapter.)

OOH...Artful Dodger...Elijah Wood...Elijah Wood nekked as the day he was born...*swoons*

Lucy is a star - someone in squalor trying to be a saint. Bless. Keep on writing LG, big hugs and see you around.

Dark stuff - I like the seediness of it all. Lucy's tougher than I thought too.