I love the concept of this story. :D

NICE (:

Beautiful :)

It was simple and light-hearted, and some of the scenes were simply adorable.

And it might be coincidence, but I liked how you made the title from "To His Coy Mistress" (you did, right? The "Had we but world enough and time, this coyness, lady, bla bla bla" line?).

awesome! plz keep writing

the was real good. short and really sweet. i likey

I. Love. This. A whole lot. Most specifically the "suavely persuading" and the "he-said-she-said" and of COURSE referencing puss-in-boots. and the third to last sentence. and the first one. and everything in between.
thanks for writing this.

Aw, that was sweet!
Nice format, and no mistakes that I could find.
Great job!
Keep it up! =)
♥heLen

Oh gosh. That was sweet, fluffy, cute all at the same time! I adore it. Adding into C2.

aww! this is so adorable!
the format is really good and it was really fun to read!

aw ... i really love this story, it's so sweet. And when you bomb the R/Hr ship, i will be right there ... uhh ... bombing it with you XD

Amazing story - I love your writing style.
This story was so poignant and the humour kept it from being too much - a great one shot.
I totally agree with you on R/Hr by the way - I have cannons and guns to go with your grenades - let me know when you're ready to sink that ship :D

I loved the format of the story! It was the first fic I've read in the style of vignettes and I think you really made it work for you. The story was very cute without being overly mushy. I loved the voice as well. Very well written and there's nothing I didn't like.

Just a couple questions: How did you come up with the title? Why did you choose two titles per vignette? Just curious to understand an author's perspective. =)

Aw! I love it to bits!
Its so nice!
Amazing! I love how you wrote this... I mean i wasnt expecting anything like this.
This fic is really unique. i swear.
This is one of the best one shots i've read.

~SS

Great story. I love the style you've got going on here, humorous, yet a romanticism that most people that have ever been in love can relate to. I like the picture you have painted here. Its a lovely way to view them.

Oh, and I agree with the abomination of a R/HG relationship from your disclaimer... Absolute rubbish. Absolute.