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Madhatter45
2009-08-28 . chapter 1
I LOVE IT! This is some of the best D/S fanfiction I've read yet. And I can't pull myself away from your site. Great Job!
-Madhatter45
P.S. If you write any Shego Drakken lemons in the main universe (I read the one you have based on the movie) please alert me. I can't seem to find any good ones. Lol which is pretty funny since even though they are the adults a couple of kids like Ron and Kim still have more M rated stuff than they do.
Thank you.
The Mad shoe1
2009-08-16 . chapter 11
Loved all the new chapters, they were just great!
I love how you always manege to keep all the character IN character unlike so many other KP fics i've read.
ozma914
2009-07-29 . chapter 11
Love it -- after all, when you put males and females together tension is bound to follow ... and now they'll either save a lot of money in hot water or invest in soundproofing.
Charlotte C.
2009-07-28 . chapter 11
Oh, the awkwardness! Very good; made me squirm with the discomfort and embarrassment they both must have felt...but also there was that sense of deeply buried and completely denied attraction. :)
KIKYZ
2009-07-23 . chapter 11
i didnt feel like logining in, cause i just wanted to say that this made laugh. i love ur writings, even when things halariously smutty. cause pervy jokes make me laugh. i feel like i should earse my last sentence, but find myself unable to do so. like how i refuse to login for this review. i'm rambling. JUST KNOW YOU ARE AN EXCELLENT WRITER and thats all i really wanted to say.
C-Diddy
2009-07-21 . chapter 11
Just when we thought things could not be anymore awkward between those two. This chapter rocked!! You're one of the best writers I've ever seen.
sockstar
2009-07-21 . chapter 11
I'm sure Drakkens lair has high speed internet access, which is pretty much all you need these days.
PoisonousAngel
2009-07-20 . chapter 11
I freaking loved this one. I didn't catch any mistakes at all and everything was just perfect as usual. Glad to see something from you. It made my day. :)
Katsumara
2009-07-20 . chapter 11
This was fantastic. Just too funny and had me laughing throughout. You're one of the better writers out there who do Drakken and Shego. It's nice seeing them as these not-so super evil, and as a pair of normal-type people, whether they know they are in love or not. Keep up the great work!
Katsumara
2009-07-20 . chapter 1
Dunno how I never reviewed this chapter, but as with all of your Shego/Drakken stuff, this was just too great. The added bonus, however, was the fact that it had Kim and Ron in there as well. I honestly think you do a fantastic job writing them, really. You have their mannerisms and everything down to a T. I could hear Ron in my head when he said "KP! No pants!" -- Haha. Great job. Gonna review your latest chapter now!
Jinnai
2009-07-20 . chapter 11
A good bit more explicit than previous chapters and none the less entertaining for it. I shall await the next installment.
KathleenDee
2009-07-20 . chapter 11
Dele collection, i laughed a lot while reading and now that i think about it... it had to happen sometime? right? lol Yes we live in the gutter here at fanficttion lol its ok.

Great update, can't wait for the next

Kath
RedBlueGreen
2009-04-12 . chapter 10
Short but sweet. It's just the kind of misguided attempt I can see Drakken making and his floundering stabs at small talk are great. The "komodo dragon" gag is fun,and foreshadowing the way D&S's relaionship will develop is always fun. And, of course, you gotta have lame puns.

Eaten up by real life but still the queen of D/S. Nice work.
sockstar
2009-04-11 . chapter 10
Poor Drakken. I don't think he knew just quite what he was getting into.
C-Diddy
2009-04-11 . chapter 10
Seeing Drakken make a fool out of himself is always entertaining. And don't worry about the pun. I think it's pretty cool.
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