Don't worry we expect you to take artistic license, after all the story would be plain bland if you didn't. If anyone didn't expect you to do so, then I can safely say they're stupid, and I mean really, really stupid. HA! That's right I called y'all stupid and there ain't nothing you can do-

Oh sh- Put down the gun... I mean it. Put down the gun... PUT THE FRICKIN-

BAM!

(Hides)

Okay quickly before they find me. The writing style is excellent, and aside from a few spelling errors it's perfectly alright. Your take on Angela is a bit different from the other fics I've read that make Angela into a bitchy princess, rather than a kindhearted one. Doesn't matter though, it's your fic and I can only make suggestions. Update, and I'll review as soon as possible.

I like your take on Angela's story. Very cool. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon!