this is definately new
seems more like them than in other stories
in short
it was awesome

Aw! Could you write a sequal to this please? This was oh so very cute!

Hee, the ending was priceless. Shikamaru's the one with the puppy yes? I gotta wonder why she puts up with him. ;D

Aw! that was so cute! my favorite part was...the entire thing actually. There's really no down fall. great story! keep it up!

Ja ne! ;)

i love it!! are you going to write more?? i think you should its GREAT !! :)

I loved it! It was so cute!

Perfect. No other word for it.

Haha, cute. I love ShikaTema, and you didn't make her the psycho-violent OOC that most people do. Only thing is that you could have been more descriptive. :D

XD For being a genus, Shika really sucks at proposing. lol! I bet all the Naruto guys would be like that though.

XD

Me likes!

Especially her reasoning about the ring being worth something. That was pretty idiotic of him to throw it at her head though. I really like the bit where he tells her it's pretty easy to keep his technique going if his opponent isn't fighting against him. That detail makes it awesome.

this is so cute. ^_^
-loves it-
you have very good grammar, and you captured their characters so perfectly!

NICE. I loved the in-character-ness of this piece. Very good.

~Pickles