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| NickStone22 2008-03-05 ch 1,  | abuseGreat Stuff. Hot fluffy and sweet. You really capture the passion and love between them well again here. You really describe Michelle well:- "He loved running his hands down her hourglass waist" I've always thought that one the things that makes Reiko/Michelle so sexy is the fact she has such a healthy and feminine hour-glass figure. It's great to see that quality carried over into physical descriptions of the character in fan-fics. I love the way they tease each other:- "I know your plans, keep me naked in here all day, being a slave to your every wish" Certainly can't blame Tony there. I'd definitely like to have Michelle naked in my bed, being a slave to my every wish. lol ;) Seriously, really good work. Keep it up. :) |
| saturn567 2008-02-27 ch 1, | abusevery sweet! |
| Jurojin 2008-02-20 ch 1, | abuseWow! Great job! It was sexy but very heart warming. Keep'm coming! |
| MichelleBA 2008-02-19 ch 1, | abuseThat was adorable! I especially loved the last line...great job!! and couldn't we all use some fluff sometimes..lol:) |
| TerriG 2008-02-19 ch 1, | abuseReally lovely...until the last line, which I personally felt didn't really fit too well. The quote itself is beautiful, but I think together with Tony's additional line it was overdone. Just a personal opinion, but I think half of the quote, or the quote alone, would have rounded it off beautifuly! Loved the rest of it though. |
| NatyAlbie 2008-02-19 ch 1, | abuseOhh, it was so sweet! That end gave me goosebumps! Lovely work! |