Reviews for Ahto City Sonata

Y St. Ace
2008-03-17
ch 1,

abuseI missed this during the challenge. It's sad and brutal, but definitely brilliant. One of my favorite bits was, "Powerful enough to crush an empire. What a ** of an expectation."

I'm a sucker for Canderous and even though he was a foil for Revan's emotions, he felt like really solid presence in this story.

The flipping between the conversation with Carth and Revan's current thoughts were a bit confusing when Revan's current thoughts were based on remembering other events, such as what had happened with Canderous. It wasn't confusing in the sense I couldn't follow it, it was just a little twisty at times.

It's a great story and definitely one of my favorites.

general-joseph-dickson
2008-02-21
ch 1,

abuseNice.

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