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| bookworm45 2008-09-14 ch 13,  | abuseAwesome job! |
| theAlyCat 2008-05-29 ch 13, | abuseI loved seeing the team in 1922 New York, especially with Danny as a mobster! Great Story! Just out of curiosity: Is Judge Caine a reference to Horatio? Because that was the first thing that came to my mind. |
| notesofwimsey 2008-03-23 ch 13, | abuse"Aw hell. I died...but I was good enough to make it to heaven. I see bright lights. And then the face of an angel appears in front of me. Long hair, serious green eyes. I smile. God’s got great taste. The angel reaches out for my hand." Love this bit - so great. In fact, of course, I loved the whole story - the characterizations worked perfectly and the whole story had a tight arc that kept things moving beautifully. I would love to see this universe go on. |
| TatianaMik 2008-03-22 ch 13, | abuseMan, I hate it took me so long to get back to this story. I love it. It's awesome. |
| Bluenose 2008-03-06 ch 13, | abuseGood job, nice blend of humour and action, perfect fit for the story. You did a great job of fitting every one in and keeping them true to character. Be interesting to see where you go with a sequel. |
| mustlovecat 2008-03-05 ch 13, | abuseAwesome ending to a wonderful story. I'm so happy you ran with the idea and I got to see it play out like this. There were too many great moments to quote here, but I loved the image of Stella popping the top of the beer with her teeth LOL Great job! |
| mustlovecat 2008-03-05 ch 12, | abuseOh, no! Flack is always trying to live up to his father, isn't he? I can't wait to see how this plays out! |
| mustlovecat 2008-03-05 ch 11, | abuseOMG, this just keeps getting better and better. Somehow I fell behind, but I'm off now to read the rest!! |
| marialisa 2008-03-04 ch 13, | abusePerfect ending to an excellent fic. Original storyline, well written and with the promise of more - I'll keep my fingers crossed! |
| xdannyx 2008-03-03 ch 13, | abuseoh my god that was so good! |
| TutorGirlml 2008-03-01 ch 13, | abuseWhat a wonderful, perfect ending. I think Stella did alright too, because I totally love your Flack in this story. That last line was great! And Mac of all people bringing them an illegal beer, that definitely made me smile. I was sorry to see this story end, but you did a great job with it. Thanks for sharing it! |
| SallyJetson 2008-03-01 ch 13, | abuseThat was a wonderful wrapup to the story. Taylor sneaking in the beer and Stella pulling off the cap with her teeth was just perfect. This was an excellent 20's era story that thorougly entertained me! Good job! |
| kiwi-messer 2008-03-01 ch 13, | abuseI've been following this story with baited breath...and prob should have reviewed earlier...*looks at feet* But what a fantastic ending! I loved this story... def something for my favourite stories list! keep writing and until next time... |
| lily moonlight 2008-03-01 ch 13, | abuseAwesome! I've really enjoyed reading this, and would love for Flack to return in this guise. Brilliantly written, you kept the character voices consistent and true throughout. Telling it through Flack's POV also worked great. I'm looking forward to reading your next story! |
| labrat love 2008-03-01 ch 13, | abusegreat story! period pieces are hard sometimes but you nailed it! i'd love to see Flack play cowboy in maybe say a Montana wedding? |