Reviews for Mending the brokenhearted

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MewStrawberry 2008-07-17 ch 1,	abusehey dirty chiban! omg im so sorry i havent sent u the rest of wanting u the way i do.. i still have that job to give you... u still want it? i have all the chaps i think idk how many u did before u took it off anywho..hope u reply
Stephanie 2008-07-16 ch 4, anon.	abuseThis is story is really good! I like how you stayed true to the original characters, but have built so much of your own story around them. Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more!
Angelfly06 2008-07-04 ch 4,	abuseso bella ended up with jacob? well good for them! and great chapter!! poor edward, every girl he wants ends up with another guy, any way update soon!!
Farough 2008-07-03 ch 4,	abuseThis is definitely an intriguing story, I must say. I'm still contemplating the idea of this pairing, though simply because I am picky about whom Edward is with, lol. I urge you to continue, I think this story has some potential. On a different note, I think it would be beneficial for you to go over what you have written and make sure it makes some sense, grammatically. It's not bad for it, but it would make it just that much better. :)
The Crystal Raven 2008-07-02 ch 4,	abuseNo u don't suck! I loved this chapter, please write more! Perhaps with more me...? ~Alice :3
Reina Gatana 2008-06-28 ch 4,	abuseLoving this story! I think you pretty much nailed both characters, please update!!
all u need is love! 2008-06-25 ch 4, anon.	abuseyeah! i'm so happy! please PLEASE!! update soon!!
animefan88tv-2manymangas2lo... 2008-06-24 ch 4,	abuseanother excellent chapter, hope you update soon
Mrs. Dom Masbolle 2008-06-24 ch 1,	abuse/s/3618334/1/Blood_and_more_Blood check out this fic... from Gumea... it's called Blood and more Blood... what a weird coincidence! yours is good though!
Mrs. Dom Masbolle 2008-06-24 ch 4,	abusei'm really confused... isn't there a fic out there that is almost exactly like this? or are you that author and you are just redoing it? this is like reading deja vu...
his-crooked-smile-1901 2008-06-24 ch 1,	abuseEdward. Really? I personally think that you shouln't mix Edward with Vivian if you've laready read twilight.
Eva 2008-06-13 ch 3, anon.	abusePlease update. The suspense just kills.
sharp fang 2008-06-08 ch 3,	abuseI like the way this is going! keep up the hard work!
squirrels_nature's_speedbum... 2008-06-05 ch 2, anon.	abuseThis is flipping amazing. The way it seems so real and how I wish I was Vivian makes me so jealous.
milikania 2008-06-05 ch 3, anon.	abuseI absolutely love this fanfic. You have done an amazing job and I love this pairing alot more then BellaxEdward so go figure. I just think that forbidden love is the best kind. I love it!

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