I think I've read this before as it all seems vaguely familiar. Even with that, though, I delighted with each chapter, the slow build, the mystery, the excellent characterisations. Great story; I'll definitely be checking out your other ones, too!

terrific story! I've been wondering though, is Hermione going to be with a limp forever? Or will it heal?

Lovely! One of the best written SS/HG fics I've read. I loved your plot and how you brought them together. Watch your spelling. A couple of things like was instead of has are probably typos from your fingers not catching up with your brain. Other than that, though, your grammar was flawless. I really like your dialogue because I felt it really fit the characters. Wonderful job!

That was awesome! As evidenced that I am up after 2 am and I have work tomorrow, I simply could not stop reading! Your depiction of Snape was wonderful - I could imagine any girl falling for him. I think that you are a fabulously talented writer, and I hope that we see much more from you. And I know I said it in another review, but I do hope you finish MM, too. I think, if possible, the blossoming of their relationship was even more slow and tender than in Requiem, although this was beautiful, too. Your dialogue is very believable, and your characters sound true to self. Really fantastic work!

wonderful

So far I don't think your Severus or Hermione are in character at all, but that doesn't mean I don't enjoy the story! Phlegmatic is a bit of a strange word to associate with Snape but if you look deep enough into the words roots, it basically means expressionless so I can live with that too. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Good story, had me hooked right from the start. Just one little thing: you keep describing Snape's face as "phlegmatic", which isn't an adjective I would associate with him. "Stoic" or "emotionless" maybe, but never "phlegmatic". That to me sounds more like lazy, sleepy, tired, apathetic or dull, none of which sound like Snape.
Other than that, fabulous! Can't wait to read to the end.

Great story.

Loved the ending! :D

Can't believe Draco died though ): anyway, thanks so much for sharing this fabulous story with us! Only thing I didn't really like was how Hermione always seemed to do more harm than good, & the focus on the Gryffindor/Slytherin traits was a bit too much. But it's still really enjoyable to read this :D

i had a bizarre to bring your reviews up to 500. congrats!

wow. great story.

Hey(: I know you've completed this story long ago, but I'd just want to say that this is a beautifully-written piece! Few grammar mistakes here and there, but otherwise really pleasant and enjoyable to read!

P.S. This is my first time reading a SS/HG story, and yours is wonderful!(:

I am so glad that you mentioned this in Memento Mori! I realized that I can get my fill of your amazing story-telling from this fic since you put the other one on hiatus! :D This made my day.

For all her eager insistence to stay, it does sound like Hermione did more harm than good. Not only did she come into a battle injured, but she brought a civilian - who another soldier had to die to save.

wo! she yelled at potter! yay!