This is one of the greatest fanfictions ever. Integrated with the somehow melechony section it will be incredible. Please don't let this fic die. The Cavils should be put on a trial for all the evil they've done to both cyclons and humanity.

Excellent story!

One hell of a battle.

Got to ask, what happen to 'fuck'? I don't think I've heard any of the Wolverines say fuck all throughtout this story.

I'm actually surprise with how well Sharon preformed. I expected a human form cylon to be on equal grounds with a Wolverine human. But she did have good motivation, as you said.

The debate in the end was entertaining. I liked that lawyer but I keep expecting him to pull some demon shit.

I don't have a problem with gene engineering, so long asits used in a practical sense. The Wolverines seems to be doing just that, eliminating heredetary illnesses, improving life span, immune system, intelligence and physical. And the iron womb, well put it this way: how many wives wish for a child of their own but are unable to carry one in their wombs. Look at the first 10 minutes of 'Up'.

But I agree that the other clans are taking this beyond ethical levels. There's a difference between improving and correcting to down right altering.

Kinda hoping for an arm wrestling challenge.

I like those two, they got good comidic timing.

Very clever in the translation on how Earth doesn't have words like 'laser' or even 'gun' during Ancient times.

Okay. A standard start. Entertaining the bad translation program.

Biggest question is why isn't this in the crossove section? Woulda found it a lot easier.

Ok. Not sure what your background is, but speaking as an Old Retired Army MP, you're channeling us pretty well.

So far your story is well researched and thoughtfully written. Your conclusions based on information garnered from BSG episodes, and BT books and I am assuming Technical Readout Sourcebooks, are insightful and Logical. Your writing style is intelligent, entertaining and engaging. As I read I can't wait to see what happens next. Well done.

Are you ever going to continue this story?

I think it's awesome!

Can I whine about how much I hate Starbuck? Both versions?
They are the Wesley Crusher of this fandom.

Now I lovvvvvvve the new equipment they are putting out, the clan is integrating well with the space Romani.

Interesting story. I really like it. You're story diverges around the point I stsrted widhing for the cylons to win. I reall change ality hope you change alot

Just stating that I believe this to be one of the best written fanfics i've read. I hope you get back to it one day

I'm totally loving the story. I like how it hasnt been all war and killing but diplomacy and hashing out new relationships between two people. It's very different in a refreshing way and I'm enjoying it immensly. You have a writing talent, don't give it up!

I like it. but please PLEASE do the dialouge quotations properly. I'ts "oooo" not 'oooo'. It drives me batty! Still, good story will keep reading :)