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FlamingSerpent
2008-07-04
ch 1,
abuseOh, wow... Wow. That's so sad! I love love love Kikyo; she was my favorite character until Kagura showed up. Even now, Kikyo proudly takes my second fave character spot. ^_^ I love this little drabble. You captured her emotions beautifully! I love the last line...but it makes me feel so depressed! I guess that's why I ship Kikyo x Inuyasha. When they were living, they were torn apart. But...I am just hoping that maybe, maybe, after one's death...they can fix things. Hopefully. *applauds* I love it!
Sagittarian's Bow
2008-06-14
ch 1,
abuseThis is very deep and insightful into what we Kikyo fans picture her thoughts to be. I love it.
Chrysolite Heart
2008-05-21
ch 1,
abuseomg i absolutely LOVED this poem! Since you've been reviewing so much for me I thought I'd come and check some of your stories out! This one was awesome! Great job!
False Forgiveness
2008-02-23
ch 1,
abuseI like this one.
GodOfFlame101
2008-02-19
ch 1,
abuseYo-ha, Writer Damien here claiming the first review! Since I havent reviewed one of your stories, I work on a special system called: Kudos and Comments!

Of course, we start with kudos. A single kudo right off the bat for writing a story about Kikyou and her pain. No one seems to take that endeavour and it is such a tragic thing to talk about. Kudos for capturing the actual mindset of Kikyou and not the evil often misguided vision many seem to take from her actions. She isn't a bad person, never has been, but she is dead so why people seem so apt to attack her is beyond me. Kudos for answering your own Rhetorical questions! Not many people take the time to ask a thought-provoking question and then shove the answer right down the throats of dumbstruck readers. A final batch of kudos for that amazing line: "haunted by memories – once upon a times – that can never be again…" No other sentence could possibly capture the tragedy and pitifulness that is Kikyou's resurrected being.

Not so many comments though. There isn't anything that caught my eye that wasn't in the kudo section but that's fine. Excellent that there were no (that I found, though I didn't peer too closely) spelling mistakes. Nice work there MadeNew.

Awesome fic, glad I was exploring!
~"Damien"
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