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| Ergo Sum Ego 2008-06-24 ch 1, | abuseFirst, l-o-v-e this. Totally right, after I read, after 3 times, I was still WTF? And remove that 'embarrassing' clause. Don't need it. Me thinks it stand well enough as it is, w/o all the disclaimers. Own. IT. After the second time: This is Funny and Witty as hell. But I have to disagree with you the whole movie vs. book argument. Book rocked it. K did an amazing job, but come on...ACC really brought you in with the creepiness of HAL and Dave. I really felt those salient moments between man and machine much more so than the visual, which got tedious. Not a great fan of 'Delilah' song, but I don't mind, and freakin' hell, it works. It reads great w/o the tune, too. So bravo, even if you didn't mean it both ways. Got the creepy part down pat. Oh yeah...what the other guy said...what were you on? Whatev it was...did you good. :D. And yeah..CE...brain-twisting whopper. |
| HAL-9001 2008-05-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseAmazing, and very accurate description of the problem. Have you by chance made a recording of it? |
| Ember Nickel 2008-04-02 ch 1, | abuseThis is...very amusing. Well done. |
| RSM Raezin PPA 81st Regimen... 2008-02-19 ch 1, | abuseOh man, that was so delectably dim witted. What were you smoking when you thought up this shiznit? But I do agree with your description of Mr. Clarks work, to an extent. |