luv,luv,luv this

great story

great story.

yes this works!

you had me going until she said "Mic", really good stuff.

This is really good. In fact, its the only one I've read and liked where Mic was one of the main characters. And if you tweak it just slightly, it could be applied to Mac and Harm.)

GREAT! Terrific! Wow totally different ending than expected! And I'm good at guessing! Keep up the good work!

Oh my gosh! That was so good. Its a really different angle than most. Really liked it.