O.O! Crap! I'm sorry about my last review! I had more to say but I accidentally pressed the submit review before I could type it down. Sorry! *bows*

But what I was going to say was I really like your story. Those two parts were my favorites and I really liked the feel of them. I like the feel of the whole story but those two parts were absolute favorite.

But um, yeah I really hope you update soon and again, sorry for my clumsiness *bows repeatedly*!

He was all alone, standing in darkness. He could not see anything nor hear anything. The only thing he felt was a hot, burning wind across his face, blowing his hair around his eyes. His eyes, there was something different…strange about his eyes, but he could not see them; there was only darkness, an eternity of burning darkness.
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Darkness: creeping, lingering, depressing darkness. A shaggy blond headed boy with strange eyes stood alone, nothing around him but a burning, hot, wispy wind blowing across his features. ‘Hahahahaha,’ a sound, the only sound, echoing off the nothingness, rising in volume as is continued to resound. There was a burning pain. A deep burning sensation as if one’s skin was being ripped off. Pain, other than the darkness, there was only pain, and that terrifying laugh echoing through his mind. He looked at his shirtless stomach; there was a swirl design with markings surrounding it painted across his skin. It was glowing, burning red setting his skin on fire. It was a terrible pain growing more and more intense with each passing second and the haunting laugh grew louder as well. He screamed, but his shouts were drowned out by the laugh, the pain, the darkness. His body went weak and he fell to his knees, and to the floor. He could barley open his eyes but he kept them open long enough to see something through the darkness, something darker than the darkness. It was…

“Naruto!”
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Wow! Kinda creepy chapter 0.0 Update soon ^-^

Yay, getting juicier! Update soon :)

BORED BORED. I got to the sixth chapter and i like the plot and all but i got really really bored... better luck next time.

MORE PLEASE! It's getting so good!

Quiz: Thank you very much. (Lolz, this is fun xD)

'nyways, once again, great chapter! Update soon ^.~

AWESOME! Lookin' forward to readin' more :D

Oh and the Pop quiz thing: How are you? - Yes, I'm fine. (Hehe, I jus' had to answer that xD)

'nyways, Ja Ne~~!!

*Nods in agreement* Hell Yeah! Naruto was the son of a genuis, obviously he would be like a prodigy!

*Reads on*

Wow, quite the long flashback I see. But still, it's very interesting!

I almost stopped breathing there...I'm so glued to my chair right now!

OMG?! What's happening to Naruto?

*Reads on*

One question: Hey I wanna quickly ask, did you get the name "Daisuke" from DN Angel?

Damn! I wanted to see who that was in the dream. But anyway, I'm jus' stoppin' by to review :)

Hmm...this is interesting so far. I shall read on and review later :)

Ja Ne.

Well, I don't generally review a story unless it really catches my eye, but I felt extremely bad for you with only one review. So here's another one, in the hopes that it will help you write and motivate you.
Great chapter, overall story, few grammar mistakes here and there, but nothing to really degrade from the quality. What's happening to Naruto that Kakashi alluded to?
Update soon!