 Super-chunky-monkey 2009-11-01 . chapter 3"Molly is a beautiful young girl at the age of 16. She has deep green eyes and long raven black hair that stops at her mid back. Vary curvy (in a good way) with a C cup. She wears purple rem glasses and has a dark freckle under her right eye."
Well, to start off, MARY SUE ATTACK! Okay, your girl is a total Mary Sue (and if you don't know what that is, look it up)
The best part of this story is the part where it stops because then the pain ends. She helps the Creeper down in chapter 2, wouldn't he just eat her and be on his way, no matter what she did for him?!
Gag. Barf.
This is a insult to all Jeepers Creepers fandoms everywhere. >:( |
 Sin-Skyeon 2009-05-20 . chapter 6xD molly is crazy |
 Danaeeb 2009-02-19 . chapter 1Cool story, can't wait until next chapter! Well I guess you have to be a little crazy to help the creeper. |
 American History Lover2009 2008-12-16 . chapter 6plz update real soon. |
 DragonLight2647 2008-11-30 . chapter 1Great story! Please continue it! :) |
 Takai-Tenshi13 2008-11-29 . chapter 6Yup and while Saiyanokageruai and Danica reminded you to write this chapter, I will be bugging you in school to finish this >XD hahaha! prepare for the bugging Kyrsea lol |
 Samantha-san13 2008-10-19 . chapter 6Very cool story. I really like it so far. I can't wait for an update. |
 x0tictactoe0x 2008-09-30 . chapter 6I really hope you are still writing this story, because i'm quite enjoying it! |
 jinxedpixie 2008-09-25 . chapter 6-standing ovation-
yayz for the new and good chap. what is her past? How did she kill her family? Will it be told in the next chapter?
-bouncing around in my seat for the next chap- can't wait for the next one
~jinx |
 DarkLozFanUberest 2008-09-21 . chapter 4Oh! So I have read this b4! ^w^' ehehehe yeah I finished chap. 6 and saw Saiya's username and mine... heh that was a little weird, but then I remembered that Saiya had told ya it! yep, Sometimers strikes again XDD!! But yeah, Good work on this! Keep up the Awesome Work!! X3 ~ |
 DarkLozFanUberest 2008-09-21 . chapter 3XDD hehehe if that was me I would probably be like 0//_//0 "uhm..." and I would probably be 0.o' 'well i guess everyone likes different foods' or strick some idiotic poise and salute before running off (mostly likely running into a wall on the way) heh. But that was a good funny chapter! Great Work, Keep it up man! |
 DarkLozFanUberest 2008-09-21 . chapter 2Yeah! hehe ^w^ awesome you useded Jeepers Creepers! ... I feel that I may have read this before 8D but that could just be sometimers actin' up again! XDD ^w^' I don't think that that is an actual mental disorder so no worries! Oh and I think you accidentally called her Danielle in the last sentence, *checks* yea, NEway! Good job wit' this! Woo! Go Scary (though I find it funny) Movies!!
Pwease Update too, it would be very nice if you could! X3 ~ |
 A Last Kiss For Succubus 2008-09-06 . chapter 6WOW!
I hope you continue this story! Molly is so damn adorable! The Creeper is just amazing :]
Yay to devouring humans and "wall art''
:]
Oh, I can't wait to read about what happened in Molly's past! Why does she have repressed memories? What happened?
-B |
 Ami Quinton26 2008-08-02 . chapter 6::clapclap:: I really like this, keep writing. |
 DarkLozFanUberest 2008-08-02 . chapter 5oopsa sowy i forgot yer DLcookies!! here they r:
/watch?v=FtUb5bsEf3E (random vid)
/watch?v=hAOoRtPr5Kk (also random, darkish)
/watch?v=c4Fq11o12ic&feature=PlayList&p=AA5F38A964CDC288&index=66
(only song i've found so far that minds us of yer story)
/watch?v=rk0wPVROKQg&feature=related (extra)
/watch?v=c4Fq11o12ic&feature=PlayList&p=
AA5F38A964CDC288&index=66
^ again if other gets cut off er somtin! |