Ah you are learning from me aren't you? Leaving a teasing clue about the future of your series at the end of the story...(laughs evilly) fun isn't it?

Well, anyway I am curious as to what exactly Lorenzo is taling about, but I suppose I'll find out sooner or later...till then, see ya!

Your bro-in-arms,
DB

:O... That's it? aww... Sequal time! :D loved tha fic

good story ive been here form the beging and here till the end and it is great i do hope we find out what happens next but owel this has stil been a good story

by for now but not for ever

well, a nice end to a nice story. 14/10. one question though, did Ash step through the Portal or not? also, you might want to change the status to complete.

Aww geez...(sniffs)...that ending bit...(sniffs again before muttering what sounds like "I'm not gonna cry.")...I thought I was the only one who could pull off tear-jerking/heart-warming moments like that, but I think you managed to trump all of the ones I've written!

Congrats on finishing the story. I now applaud for you (applause) and give you a hearty pat on the back. The only thing you have to do now is switch it from "In-Progress" to "Complete".

CJ...good luck on any of your future stories and ideas. All I've got left to say is...well...see ya next time.

Your eternal bro-in-arms,
DB

(Gives a thumbs up before speeding off)

Damn... Awesome, man. is there a sequal yet? :D

Wow. That was... I don't know what I can say that will do it justice, to be honest.

I take my hat off to you (or I would if I was wearing one) for you have surpassed expectations. And those expectations were pretty high, too. I give you top marks for... well... EVERYTHING.

I really didn't notice any issues this time around, so no complaints there.

On another note, good luck with your week.

Kotor, out.

Very impresive, I can honestly say that this is one of my all time favorite stories on Fanfiction. Keep up the good work!

Congrats on your longest chapter ever! I also have to give congrats to Cyphrus who finally confessed to Lily, I can tell they both are happy.

Overall this was a great chapter. A couple spelling mistakes here and there, but apart from that it was pretty good. One of my favorite parts was Model C and Cyphrus arguing...that really made me laugh.

Aww, Trigger's almost over? I had a feeling that it was but still...

Well, nothing much else to say but keep up the good work!

Your bro-in-arms,
DB

Ok, Fourth Time I've written this, damned internet...

Simply put, This unit is impressed. I wouldn't have had the patience to write a chapter this long, 'specially considering the current situation...

I didn't notice too many errors, any that were there, I've forgotten, so...

BACKSTORY. I LIKE.

And the ending is what we in the internet business refer to as "made of win," so no qualms on that.

In short, I like it. Nice work.

Now, time to go eject this sorry heap of a laptop through a window...

it was fun to write? More so, it was fun to read.

Wow. You somehow practically seamlessly merged 2 things that i thought couldn't be merged. 15/10 for that as well as faving & alerting.

Cool! an extended Plot of Pokemon heroes! Awesome Fic mate.

shit, I'm late!

Right, down to business.

Short, maybe. Good, definitely. That's pretty much all that really needs to be said. A couple typos, but nothing major.

Looking forward to the next one.

Kotor.

Hey, you listened to me! Cyphrus shall live!

I am so glad that Lily won't lose him...yea, I'm very happy now. Its weird but this chapter cheered me up...go figure.

Keep up the good work.

Your bro-in-arms,
DB