Sweet chapter! ^-^ Just one little thing. On the part when they're going home you forgot to write "come" you wrote “Yeah, I’m sorry…you can along if you’d like!” Other than that, I didn't find any grammar/misspelling mistakes. Trunks is so cute!! BTW, congrats on updating fast. I'm still working on mine :P Later!

Nigsea

Aw poor Trunks...I'll get rid of Mace for him!! Mace is human thus making him an easy target to "dispose" of ^^ lol

OMG, I got so excited when Trunks and Charisma were talking alone and then that. I hate you! j/k. I really loved it. That twist was genius! I didn't see it coming, or maybe I'm just dense. lol. I can see now why it took you so long. See ya!

Yes there's a HUGE mistake! Mace needs to go I don't care how, he just needs to go! Trunks is way more important and he's way more handsome! Mace needs to disappear like now or next update, either one works for me!

Wow, that girl's a real...Yea many bad things can be said but won't. But I do love this story and I really enjoyed this chapter I can't wait for the next one to come out!

Yay!! I'm excited about the next chapter!! Keep up the good work!!

Not writer's block! >_< and just when it getting more and more interesting, too! If it gets worse, could you at least not leave it in a cliff hanger, please? I don't think I could bare it. This was so good, but jeez, Charisma is so oblivious and dense towards Trunk's feelings.

Nigsea

Excellent story! Cannot wait for the next chapters!!

SO GOD! I'm so happy you're on a roll here. I can't wait for Trunks to realize his feelings. Oh, Bulma, Bulma, Bulma, gotta love her; she sure knows her son pretty well.

I know you're making Mace a good guy (at least for now, it seems) but I still hate his guts for some reason. I dislike him so much, it makes me irritated. It must be because I dislike his type, who are handsome, good at sports, and I bet he's good at academics too, right? They're like perfect, I hate them. Not in fiction only but in real life too. I don't know why, maybe because it makes me think they have a hidden agenda. Anyhow, I'm looking forward for more.

Nigsea

I love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter, bo yucky girl and as cute as Mace sounds CharismaXTrunks man, that's what I want to see! I really can't wait for the next chapter!

Trunks is gonna be so jealous, I can't wait. Gee, you're really on a roll here! Not that I'm complaining, on the contrary. I have so many scenarios on my mind that you might be thinking of writing that I'm getting really excited. I can hardly wait!! ^.^

I love jealousy in fiction is SO much fun to play with the characters. Does that mean I'm a little mean? Oh well, it was a great chapter. You're updating a whole lot faster than I am even though you said you had writer's block. lol. Is there any chance that Trunks might do something extremely OC like suddenly kissing Charisma out of jealousy?

Yay, I love it! They're finally all big and ready for some real action, aka romance, jealousy. Oh, I can't wait. Sorry, I'm putting pressure on ya, but you know I love this story SO much.

I like this story!! X3 Awesome job! BTW, there is a typo, I guess, at the beginning of the chapter. Charisma said they were in the twelfth grade and were graduating in a few months. Then a few paragraphs later, Misa said that they were juniors and would be graduating in a year. Just thought you should know. ^_^; Anyway, good chapter!

AWW, so cute! Can't you fast foward time and make them teenagers already? I can't wait XD