I loved Marlene. She is so sweet and adorable. Just a regular Aerith. Hehe. This was very cute and once again I like it a lot! Your writing is always great to read!

ah-ha! I have finally seen a AMV with Shelke in it so now I know who she is! This was a good chapter! Hehe. And I of course loved the part about Cloud and Aerith. Hehe.

It so should have been Cid doing her hair, he's such a wannabe girl :P

Feelings, who needs them :p Another great one, but where is Cid? Is he out shopping for clothes again?

Aww... so cute! I love Marlene! She is so cute and adorable! This is a great story about fears and stuff. I loved it.

This was cute, but sadly I'm not sure who Shelke. The writing was good as was the story, but I would probably enjoy it more if I knew who she was.

Fashion, do doo de doo de doo de doo, HA HA, I like Cid shopping ^_^