Quite good.

Hilariousness! Please write another.

Ok, that's an unholy union if ever there was one. *laugh* Poor Junpei. And poor Demi-fiend. Seems he's about to get a surprise.

Great job! In answer to Pharos' inquiry; "Yes, so it was. Very amusing."

I have no idea what Nocturn is about... but I like this.

Oh dear god that was hilarious! Poor Junpei! To think that lucifer and death would spend their free time tormenting others. They really must have boring lives if that's what they call 'fun.' And I love the last part about holding hands. This story is going into my favs.

Wow, not bad! I expected yaoi, but I was wrong! Very nice!