Wow, this story is really awesome! I got through the whole thing in less than an hour because I couldn't stop reading it!! I know you probably hear this a lot but please update Update UPDATE!! I'm just so anxious to read the end of the story and I'm really enjoying it.

I love how you wrote your characters. Axel's attitude is perfect and I can tell that you must've done a lot of studying to get it just right. I was a little surprised when I saw that Demyx wasn't his friend (since that seems to happen in a lot of fics) but I guess you do have a point about Axel only liking Roxas. In a way I kind of like it that way. It's different.

Wow, Riku is such a douche in this story. -.-; I didn't really get why he was trying to molest Roxas. Just because he looked like Sora? I was just a tad confused.

Other than that, awesome story. I love how your plot just flows together. Must've taken you a while to plan it out. Please continue!

I was expecting Axels friend to be Reno.

OMG! I loved that! It was like when Tatsuha was going to molest Shuichi because he was just like Ryuichi, but Yuki reappeared and Shuichi glomped him in fear while he just sort of ignored his brother's status as a rapist...

Anyway, I guess it wasn't exactly like that... but it made me think of it. Maybe I'm just tired...

Okay, I didn't call that one... I was sure the ranch house and the man with girly hair would be Marluxia and some sort of dorky plant thingy... *grumbles anstily about being wrong*

Well, the suspense is working better for you now. :D

Goodness, I called that one! As soon as alcohol was mentioned I knew the skank-whore would be too drunk to sleep with Axel. Yay! He didn't cheat on Roxas!

aw...so the lawyer was guna b Zexy :( and your not continuing ..aw : (
o well : )
kkep on writing akuroku tho XD and when is sugar and spice being updated?

ohmygoodnes *screams - squeals- w.e*
when is the next update ... WHEN..I NEED TO KNOW :p
ur an awesome writer.. am i right when i say that the last time u updated this was 28 March 2008 ... im wrong right ? please hurry..and yes i know who the lawyer is, the one and very only ..Zexion ♥~ but you know, Dem isn't that annoying..hes just very livng..and wow...Riku the snitch..i love riku tho..it was hard beating him in the first game..but then i got the cloud keyblade and he was out in 2 minutes flat XD and please... make Dem-Dem have more dignity XD

Overall : Amazing Job : D

This chapter is beautiful. It's also sad in a happy way, ya know? The whole, 'I love you' thing actually made me cry... (in a good way) Keep up the good work! I hope the next chapter is up soon! Good luck on your legal stuff research!

I'm guessing Luxord or Xigbar as the lawyer. (just because of 'Served' by LadyChimera and Nire-chan (I hope I spelled their names right...^^) on dA)

Wah! Where's the rest? I want to see lawyer Zexy! You are such a fantastic writer. I really think you did a good job with keeping true to their original characters. I adore your Demyx, trying to act all scary...

...I love this.
Yes my dear, believe it.
LOVE. IT.
I think I love it most because of you cute and out of ordinary it is. 'Rox and Axel on the run from the world, Axel nearly getting freaky with a drunk chick and Roxas nearly getting raped by a Sora crazed Riku...' So original. So freakishly fantastic.

I read this mainly because it was your first fic, and it's like... 'OMG FAN FIC VIRGIN. I WATCH YOU LEWK SILLY NAO! 8D' Because no matter how hard you try, everyone somehow looks silly with their first fic.
Though not so much with you- what with this story and its brilliance and all...
It was a lot of fun watching your writing improve chapter by chapter, paragraph by paragraph, and watching all your progress mix and blend with the story so smoothly.

I'd rave more about how amazing and awesome you are, but unfortunately, it's 3:30 in the morning here and I've been reading your fic, drawing Axel, Roxas, Sora, and Riku looking faggy, listening to Rihanna's 'Disturbia' and Nick Lachey's 'What's left of me' simultaneously and most often ALL AT THE SAME TIME since like... 8 a.m or something. And I have to get up in 4 hours. SO I DO BELIEVE I SHOULD GO NOW! 8D

I will leave you with this, though- even though it's just a WIP that you might never give a second glance in some time, it's still a great start to the wonderful writer you have been and become and I most definitely got my fill of cheesy adorableness.

Thank you.

:D Ooh, ooh! The lawyer's gonna b Zexion! ^ ^

Aw, jeez, dude. You HAVE to update! Next chapter=need! XD

-NX.

oh nice :3

The pace is a little uneven, but the overall effect is really good. There's a nice mix of silliness (those lines of Axel's truly are dreadful - the Titanic one made me wince) and considered motivational stuff here; I particularly liked that Axel gets into the "someone needed and wanted his help… But he needed to help Roxas. He didn't want to get anymore involved than that" vs simple lust dichotomy. It's a nice dilemma, that one :)

I spotted one typo: "walking over to wear Roxas was stepping out of the car". While Axel wearing Roxas is a pleasing image, I guess you meant 'where'.

omg im gonna sound like such a baby but im actually crying from reading the ending of missing you!
(don't know if you realised but missing you is the name of one of the soundtracks from kingdom hearts :3)
Seriously i have tears in my eyes and my sister is giving me weird looks fromthe otherside of the room T_T
You HAVE to finish this or i think i'll cry. Even more. lol.
I don't mind if they go to jail, as long as they have a gorgeous reunion at the end :3
Omg for your first lemon that was EPIC. Im trying to get the guts to write lemon in my akuroku fic, since everyones like "you have to write hot lemoney goodness NOW!"
Lol well done and I hope you keep writing forever

Wee!
I likes This One,
I Knew That Riku
Was going To Be
The Surprise Guess.
I'll Be Rotfl If
Luxord Is the Lawyer!
Continuee =D