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| greengirl16 2008-07-06 ch 15,  | abuseO! I like this chapter a lot. It was written just like the scene except you added their inner emotions which audiences can't know. Those inner emotions made this chapter so much more amazing then if you hadn't included them. Nice job! |
| myturntobebrave 2008-07-06 ch 17, | abuseSorry I haven't reviewed in a while - I love these! They're all fantastic, just so you know. A Gelphie would be greatly appreciated *coughcough*!! ~myturntobebrave |
| danderson 2008-05-27 ch 13, | abuseHa! I loved their exchange about using sex as a distraction, and Yero's "That's because you enjoy it, too" which is very true, I suspect. I'm happy for them! I assume he's rehumanified, though? Haha or not, who knows...? d~ |
| danderson 2008-05-27 ch 12, | abuseAw, she's his hero. I loved how he came to find her and that he doesn't like Galinda's shrieking friends, either. This was a lovely little moment; I really enjoyed reading it. Seriously, how perfect is the image of him watching her, saying, "I don't think I'm afraid anymore." ? It's SO GOOD! Loved it. d~ |
| TheWitch'sCat 2008-05-14 ch 9, | abuseVery well done! 'A Moment' is steamy, yet sweet, definitely not smut. Very nice incorporation of the scene from the musical. It's like we're seeing what actually happened during "As long as you're mine." :-) |
| danderson 2008-05-11 ch 9, | abusehot times wopbillion. so tender, and loving, and perfect... wow. you write good love scenes. i request more. d~ |
| danderson 2008-05-11 ch 8, | abuse"With a growl of impatience, he took her mouth with his again until they were both moaning and whimpering with pleasure." hot with like a million ts on the end i'll review the others later, i just had to pause to mention that this was so hot. and lovely. and perfect. d~ |
| Eowyn-Faith 2008-04-15 ch 8, | abuseI totally loved the first one! |
| TillITryIllNeverKnow 2008-04-07 ch 1, | abuseNice, vry nice! I especially enjoyed the first. Hoping you finish that idea off. Thank you. |
| myturntobebrave 2008-03-24 ch 4, | abuseBecause you reviewed mine...this is spectacular! I really love this, please continue! Alerting. ~myturntobebrave |
| Kennedy Leigh Morgan 2008-02-26 ch 3, | abuseYay! Gloq is my favorite thing! Okay so this pretty much rocked, I loved the description, ie the "angry red mark" on Glinda's hand and the whole image of Boq melting into a man again was completely awesome! I thought the beginning dialogue was a little awkward and maybe a little out of character, but then you got 'em both perfectly characterized in the post-transformation bit, so great job there. I loved Glinda's sudden shyness, and Boq's bold spurt. It was perfect. Awesome job, can't wait for more! |
| Bomba-Fae 2008-02-25 ch 2, | abuseBoth of your drabbles are really good. I think they're all very in character too, which I liked. So good job. Cool. I'll keep reading. |
| Kennedy Leigh Morgan 2008-02-20 ch 1, | abuseThis is cute, I like it lots. I'm looking forward to more! |