Reviews for A rite of passage
sakuragirl7 10/2/11 . chapter 14
:( so beautifully written :( reminds me of things I hadn't thought about in a long time.
sakuragirl7 10/2/11 . chapter 11
Awwww :)
sakuragirl7 10/2/11 . chapter 10
sniff sniff...
sakuragirl7 10/2/11 . chapter 3
Awwww. So sweet :)
shelllynn22 9/23/11 . chapter 16
Wow, very powerful story. having had 2 mc's myself granted after married it is easy to understand with the other baggage closing off and having to grieve in her own time, we all grieve differently.I am glad the story took that turn cuz people don't realize sometimes even if you have a mc your life is still changes in a big way by a I can't wait to read the sequel!
Soniya 9/10/11 . chapter 14
heartfelt chapter...I really cried like a baby!Ironic..huh?

you should write more..please!
arocha21 9/7/11 . chapter 15
Oh my god, this is just... I can't eve... I have no words for this, really, why haven't you published a book, or have you? if so, please tell me so I can buy it, God this is just so amazingly well written.
Edwardian-Rosebud 8/31/11 . chapter 1
Great so far.
Rheka 8/9/11 . chapter 15
I really enjoyed reading your story .I liked your OOC Bella a lot :-). Thx for sharing
Dulcinea21bella 7/25/11 . chapter 14
I'm happy they are finally talking.
Dulcinea21bella 7/25/11 . chapter 12
I didn't know that about the bruising.. interesting. I feel badly for them, but it may be better in teh long run. THey have have children when they are ready.
Dulcinea21bella 7/25/11 . chapter 11
Ah. I LOVED this chapter!
Dulcinea21bella 7/25/11 . chapter 10
Wow. Great twist.
Dulcinea21bella 7/24/11 . chapter 7
Ahhhh. LOVE that last line!
Dulcinea21bella 7/24/11 . chapter 6
SHe is in over her head now...
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