I forgot to say a few things... I am a big reader and I am especially fond of Dasey. In this story when Edwin got "almost killed" and so did derek I completely and utterly freaked out like I would in a movie theater. I think that you portrayed Derek/Casey/Sam/Kendra/Emily/Edwin's characters as they should be, and the feelings and emotions were real. I could not have done a better job myself. Again you are an amazing writer. Keep up the good work!

There are some people out there who can bore me to death with the same "derek i hate you! derek i don't know what to say" Derek kisses Casey and everything is all happily ever after. You on the other hand are one of those rare writers. You truly are amazing! I enjoyed this story so much. And keep making trailors that was what first got me hooked. Congrats on an amazing story.

omg i got chills from this i never though it would be ralph! This was so amazing well done

I absolutely loved this story.

My only issue with this story is the little grammar thing. Saying "Derek and her" when it should be "she and Derek", etc.


Also, Derek said to the nurse, "with all do respect" when it's really 'due'. I just wanna help the story with this message.



This was unique, and I appreciated the refreshing way in which Casey & Derek developed their relationship & came to understand their feelings. It wasn't cheesy at all!

Hey steph :)
read this story last summer and fell in love with it and I just had to read it once again today just because it was so amazing I missed it :D Anyways, good job. This is the first fanfic ever that I've read twice.
I <3 it :D
Take care,
CompleteFictionFanatic. BDw you might want to check out my fic which I wrote last summer. It's called: "All I Need Now". Also a bit too filled with deaths and Dasey of course :D
Anyways hope u like it even though its nowhere as good as your fic :D

AH! IT CANT BE! NOT DEREK! I guess i'll see... btw.. nice horror.. i hate watching them but this is good!

Creepy! awsome! I use ray of sunshine too! my favorite expression! yay! another sarcastic person!

Okay so let me start off with saying that i've read so many dasey stories that they've recently started to bore me. I almost gave up hope until i found yours. It was the ABSOLUTE BEST I HAVE EVER READ, CAN BE OUT DONE! It was the only story that had me on my toes the entire time so props to you and your amazing skillz

My lazy butt just signed into FF, just so if you wanted to respond to my review and so I could fave your story.

That's all I gots to say. Sorry!

My goodness. I feel a little proud of myself, guessing right. Well, 50 percent right. I also thought it MIGHT be Sheldon. Go me though!

Now onto the constructive criticism! This is no way intended to bash your work, and I hope that anything that I have to say will help you with future FF's or original stories.

Okay, for future FF's you should try and work on them being in character. I completely understand the changing under the circumstances, it's not like I myself have not done that, but you started out "OOC" and changed them to another type of "OOC". Not too unrealisticly writing wise, but compared the show, it's a significant difference. It in no way demeans your writing, but is in my opinion better for FF's to be IN character as much as possible so that the fic is seemingly more authentic.

I love that your story played out almost exactly how a horror book would. I mean, I've done creepy, but I dont' know if I could pull of scary like you did. In the beginning I wasn't scared at all, but as soon as it got to the part with Sam in the tree, ...my heart just dropped. Seeing all the deaths play out in your fic really made me see who I liked and didn't like in the show. This may sound heartless, but when Kendra was getting killed I thought it was a little funny. It really sounded like a fake joke that Emily was freaking out over...Not that death is in anyway funny.

Ahem.*Coughs nervously*

You really had me going on Chapter 13 with the Noel bit. I was like ** no it is NOT Noel. Someone dressed him up, someone dressed him up, and imagine me rocking slightly back and forth. He just couldn't do it. But that was what made me like the chapter so much. You actually had me convinced that I was wrong. Ralph was a super creep in that chapter and I honestly think that was one of the most in character moments of the whole fic.

The epiolgue was a nice sum up but but I felt like there were a couple of small details that you left out. For instance, how did everyone know about Casey and the dog thing? Who mentioned it? An if Raplh was as Crazy-obsessed as we was, why would he subject her to that kind of public pain? I think that the cops should have been able to find something in Ralphs' room, or house, or at least on his computer that would suggest that he was doing these tihngs. I mean, after all he had sent her IM's and txt messages...those things should have been saved on his hard drive or on his mobile phone, and if he indeed thought that he was doing something good and not something bad then he would have never felt guilt enough to erase the evidence. Or even dress up for that matter. So becuase nothing was found, I think he did feel guilt and because he hid his identity, I do believe that he knew what he was doing was wrong, yet he acted otherwise.

Just speculations and tips. Hopefully anything that I have said is more helpful that anything that could possibly be hurtful. If I haven't made it clear, I enjoyed the fic, and I am sorry that I hadn't read it sooner.

DyeMHV.Rachel

Alright, I was thinking of just reading to the very end and leaving a review, BUT I want to talk a few guesses and analyze a little bit and I have a feeling that the last three chapters are going to be where it's all breaking down.

In the beginning I thought you would have included more people that she knew. I mean, Teddy is a little freakazoid, and with the mentions of wolves...and that one episode where he said are you afraid of the big bad Derek. But I'm thinking not, I don't think you went THAT far into it all. No offense, just an observation.

Then I thought it might have been Edwin, but I'm pretty sure it isn't because that's what you WANT me to think. Because that was pretty ridiculous him coming home randomly, but then the phone call, after the doggy thing...so yeah. Not Edwin.

As much as Derek WANTS it to be Noel, I have an intense feeling that it's NOT going to be him. If it is, then...well, I don't know that I could say that you were so great at mystery.

Which leaves me with these speculations. Sam wouldn't, Max...Nope...Could be a girl, but I dont' think so. Honestly, as farfetched as this sounds, my bets are on Sheldon or Ralph.

Sheldon because he could have been crazy enough to cut out his own tongue, out of all the deaths why would this attack leave the victim alive?

And Ralph because he's acting too cavalier about it all. And watching Casey and Emily at the mall, and agreeing to watch Kendra. How the hell is that NOT creepy? Even if I knew who was watching me, it wouldn't make me feel any safer.

Those are my final STRONG guesses. We shall see in due time whether I was correct in anyway.

*Scurries to finish*

HOLY CRAP! What an emotional ride you've put me on! It is a rarity that I actually get through a LWD chapter story, but oh my gosh, I could NOT stop reading. I'm shaking as I write this because it was so intense and mind-blowing. I was literally either clutching my face, crying, or screaming 'no!' throughout the whole thing. I did not expect ANY of that. Especially the ending. Wow. It was terribly heart-wrenching, but at the same time, the conclusion was beautiful. You have power with writing plots and suspense! I can tell you that much! That was just amazing. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with us!

I never wouldve guessed it was ralph. Wow... that was awsome. Though it was sad that all thier friends died. But im glad that edwin didn't. Anyways... Loved it. Great job.

Wow. Just wow :) I really loved this! Everything fit so perfectly! One my most favorite Dasey fics ever! :)