F I've been wanting to review this for forever-and-the-some, but I fail so that's my everloving excuse. Expect other reviews from me whenever. This week.

In any case! Dear jibbly Jesus that was amazing. Crack indeed. I spluttered and laughed at Sagi's 1/8-7/11 bit. Sagi is such an...innocent. :o
On content, incest usually squicks me, but ft this was too thuper lulzy not to just love.

Although! Handcuffs, Verus, pink...frilly...thing posing as a bed? Disregarding Sagi, it's is missing a very vital chunk of the equation! Obviously the epitome of gay in all his shapely, hip-wiggling glory--Geldoblame. ♥

Oh, and the first few lines reminded me that Olgan is a total douchebag. *noshowerjokeskthx* D:

Wow! I loves it! Heh, I think I envy Milliarde, cause Guillo is awesome! Anyways, good job! Can't wait for the next one!

Milly and Guillo drunk...and THAT...okay...
Oh, btw, did you know Verus is Sagi's Dad?

Uh oh...Verus isn't going to do...THAT...to Sagi...is he?...

uh-oh...

Heh heh! Not bad! A wee bit disturbing, but that's to be expected. Of course, one can easily picture this scene of perversion to begin with, but you did a good job painting a picture that wasn't too graphic.

And if you happen to be into crack pairings, we have a "Random Pairings" topic in the BK Writing Challenges forum. That's where myself and another user draw names out of a crudely made paper box and have people write the story with the pairing. I, personally, and stuck with Krumly/Savyna right now.

Anyways, good job! Keep at it!

I'm afraid Milly and Guillo might be too busy 8D
Ahahahah, Sagi is so naive. I just love how you keep him in-character XD and the 1/8 part. And the "kick to death" one. And the machina handcuffs. 8D
Oh, and you definitely gotta do a ShaBael. AND SOME MACHINA ANGST. 8D *pestering BKO fan*