Great story!)

This was brilliant! A perfect way for Elizabeth to react if she came back to Atlantis. They were both spot on character-wise and the conversation between them held so many unsaid things that worked their way into the story effortlessly! Great job!

Very lovely story and I liked the thing with the napkin.

SQUE I love it...sad, yet hapy lol. If you get my meaning...Very very nice!

Aww. That was very nice and sweet. I also liked how he completely missed throwing the napkin in the trash can.)

*sigh
I wish. This is lovely.

Definitely awesome. )

oh wonderful. captured how this would be perfectly. i liked the feel of it)

Nice one.

Oh...

Very nice.

Aw! I love this.