this is good

Z-O-M-G (if you excuse the fangirling) That was awesome. A bout of caring Itachi, yummylicious ItaSasu and just...wow. That was great. Thanks a bunch! :D

Squeel XD SO CUTE I just love ItachixSasuke parings screw everyone else who thinks its wrong bet Itachi want'd to do other things to Sasuke XD

Cute story.

Please write a sequel to this I mean Itachi wondered how Sasuke would move beneth him so make him find out it's not that fair that Sasuke got all the pleasure and Itachi didn't get to fulfil his.

You should have a sequel!! It would be so hot *fangirl squeal*!! But with them a little older! Yah... *imagining it*

Damn! if that wasn't hot, I dunno what is!! XD

Good but where's the lemon come on please write a sequel to this and have lemon in it.

again, a beautiful story... i know it is supposedly complete, but you should really turn it into something a bit longer. ooh like you could have a future, perhaps forest, meeting between itachi and sasuke... yeah that would be damn hot... just make sure there are lemons! oh like later itachi could be totally ** at sasuke because he went to orochimaru; then punishment could ensue... hee hee hee... and orosasu is a must... okay well i think i have rambled enough i don't really care exactly what you do, just KEEP WRITING!