Cute!

I love how you wrote this! How did I miss it before?

I love how you went through Sasuke and Sakura's POV. I could see Sasuke breaking glass when Sakura assumes his maid or whatever she was appears.

The last paragraph to the second chapter had me smiling, about Sasuke waiting for Sakura to give her his cloak.

My favorite part was "Sakura cannot know what the sight of the Uchiha fan displayed across her back does to him."

After that I was hoping for an extra chapter! You had that written so well and I wanted more.

Great job!

BEAUTIFULLLLLLLLLLLLL!

I really liked it a lot! :D

This was a really sweet yet angsty fic- my favorite. Great job writing this; it was really well-written! :P

heeheeheehee super cute

Forgiveness and hope...*sniffles* So beautiful ,D

I can't wait to read the sequel! *squeals and runs off* X3 33

and that! was what i was talking about in the last chapter! perfect, i tell you, i love the emotions and scenes that you paint here!

awwww... i am glad that you didnt just have her go, 'oh, its ok sasuke, i forgive you!' like some people do... or skip the whole, 'no, i dont forgive you yet, you have to earn back my trust, love and loyalty.' it annoys me when people do that.

forgiven, but not forgotten, though, remember!

Aww, I love this! Fics that deal with Sakura's reaction with Sasuke coming home usually have her being really angry, but I like the ones where she's sort of apathetic and neutral about it. I think it throws Sasuke off-guard more, and that's always more amusing, haha.

Love the ending! :D I have a weakness for fics where Sakura wears clothing with the Uchiha clan symbol :D

I think I'm in love with you. Seriously. This was beautiful :)

So have I ever told you how much I love how you write SasuSaku?

Sorry, this wasn't much of a critique..

- CM

Wow, excellent, I like how you told it from both sides, without needless repeating. Very good

aw that was so wonderful and well written, I loved it! Both Sasuke's and Sakura's characterizations were superb, and I kept on wanting to read more... keep up the great work! :)

oh god i loved this.

it's refreshing to see how sakura wasn't all open and forgiving although sasuke barely deserves it.

every phrase was captivating.

keep on writing, youre kickass :)