Neji was wonderfully in-character. Loved it!
Keep writing!
M.I.

well, since you said please xD

loved it. can't wait to see more of it. (:

lol, i love tenten. she is so awesome! great character writing, and also on neji. i like the situation too!

just a thought, reading your other stories, i think they are really cool, but it would be easier for readers to read them if you had them all together, so like your (amazing and creative, not to mention thrilling!) cyberpunk ones, it would probably be better if you put them all in as one story, under 'cyberpunk', or whatever, and then had the different stories as different chapters.

and also like with this one, you say that this is the 2nd oneshot out of three, but it would also be easier to put them all under one story, and label the chapters.

you dont have to do that though, just an idea!

...umm...how soon is 'soon'?

Enjoyed it. You write well and things can't always be peachy between a couple. Looking forward to reading the rest!

please update this as soon as possible.

I understand completely how it's hard to get stuff out, but this was so excellent, the mood and characterization of Neji and Tenten in this is something I've been looking for recently.

wow that was powerful. I suppose Neji's raging temper was also caused by Tenten's rash (but humane) actions... can't wait for the next installments!

so when will the installations be installed? it's been over a year already. what happened between tenten and neji? i NEED to know! please return and update

Cool chapter dude!Please continue it!:) XD

Please update this soon! This is a great story! :)

*feels curious* I wonder what will happen in the rest of this series, then...

The fight between them is pretty realistic-Tenten would fight angryily like that and force Neji to lose his calm...

(And the flashback isn't shabby either)

(and I think if Tenten hadn't saved that child, she would hate herself for that...)

i'm really excited for the next part. i hope that you decide to continue this. :D great job!

Jesus Christ Almighty. Two things: First, where are the other installments of this? Because I loved it. I’m not kidding, I adored it to pieces. Their characterization, the tension, it’s all very much palpable. I personally think they’ll feel better after they make out, but maybe that’s just me. ;) In any case, I loved it, loved it, loved it. And second: how did I ever live without your writing? It’s gorgeous, you like the same pairings as me, and it’s just – gah – jaw-dropping. Keep it up! And if you haven’t written anymore to this, please consider!

Great story. I love heroic Tenten and I loved Neji as well. Please update soon.

Wow, I just browsing through your various work when I stumbled along this little piece of yours... wondeful work. You do a magnificent job of characterizing the two.